ArHi FF: The Same Coin#7

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headtotoe

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Posted: 11 years ago

#321

Absolutely fresh and a more realistic approach to the colege romance and after years.

Just loved it to the core. It all sounded as if was really happening around me. The characterisation, the imperfectness of the perfect characters and the entire story run... Kudos for it..

Thanks for sharing it all with us.. Just continue writing...

Cheers !!

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arshi21

@arshi21

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Posted: 11 years ago

#322

I loved the last part of the epilogue.

I loved that Arnav and Khushi still, after 3 years of marriage, call each other by their last names.

I loved that last bit of a note you wrote there.

I loved Arnav and Khushi's never ending chemistry and lust and love for each other.

I loved how they always talk dirty.

I loved the way all the couples story ended.

I loved how much love (in its own way) was there between every character.

I loved the uncertain bit you put in.

I loved the college reference towards the end of the note.

I loved the naughty Raizada in bed with his wife.

I just LOVED the whole story Semanti.

Do get back soon with another one. Please? You are really, really good. :)

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sincereme

@sincereme

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Posted: 11 years ago

#323

Awesome...
You are right every relationship is not perfect and also not bound to happily average after... Life is unpredictable and so do individuals...
Loved it...
Thanks for writing such a wonderful story...:)

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@Deleted

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Posted: 11 years ago

#324

No words!

TSC is brilliant and so well written. Hats off!

I Loved it!

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Jay

@jduke

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Posted: 11 years ago

#325

I have just finished reading this story and it is very cute , lively and entertaining. Love the way you described how each of the couples relation progressed towards forever or breakup. I like your expertise in history , books, movies and how you incorporated all that in this story. Really liked the story line and finishing. Thanks for the story.

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SaRun.

@SaRun.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#326

This has to be one of my fav. College fics. Ever!!

sheer brilliance :D

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

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Posted: 11 years ago

#327

So happy to see everyone moving ahead in their life.

Once again you've kept the ending as real as possible.

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kanthi_chks

@kanthi_chks

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Posted: 11 years ago

#328

Lovely ending to an amazing story.
I'd have loved to know what happened with Akash, NK and V but as you said it is the story of today and I guess sometimes it is best to leave some things to our imagination.
I'm happy Arnav and Khushi have a happy ending. It is all about Arnav and Khushi after all. :)
Now, please don't let us miss your writing for long...
I just hope that your asli duniya gives you enough time and motivation to come up with a brand new story of ArHi for us...
Good luck with your new writing job.

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luvraj4ever

@luvraj4ever

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Posted: 11 years ago

#329

I wish I could tell u exactly how much I am gonna miss this story...I loved every character of this fic...arnav and khushi in this fic made me laugh and smile and I can't love them enough for that. .

the epilogue was perfect. .it was kind of an open end where what happened next Is left to our imagination. ..

I wish we could know a bit more about arnav and khushi's married life but that's again a reader's greed...we can never be satisfied. .hehe...

loved the last diary part..arnav leaving notes in khushi's diary was too cute and the way khushi told him to buy his own diary and stop leaving school boy notes was hilarious. ..this just shows how much they love each other so much so that khushi doesn't mind arnav reading her personal diary

I wish I could tell you to continue soon but I know that's just not going to happen this time and I am seriously very sad about that. ...

pls write another story for your readers soon. ...pls pls

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Mahnoor

@Mojoo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#330

I never prefer college lovestory but this fanfic had something that i was unable to resist reading it...It was beautiful journey reading the whole story,,waiting for regular updates *irregular at sometime* after three days n spamming sometime...Semanti Is epilogue k sath tum chaa gayi ho...It was awesome...I didnt find anyhting missing here...My most favr8 part was Excerpt from Khushi's diary...Hahaha...it was fantasstiicc...U r brilliant writer Semanti...Love U loads n final *hug* for giving us such an amzing story about our favr8 couple...Wish u luck for ur future...