ArHi FF: The Same Coin#7

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#281

Congratulations for the new thread ...

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zainza

@zainza

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#282

Thank you Semanti for giving us such a beautiful college story to read, I loved the characterisation and the relationship between Arnav and Khushi. And I also loved Firebolt's The Chronicles of KKG and I hope she completes that story some day.

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Itu

@simi58

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#283

Loved the epilogue part B...

Yes u left a lot of story incomplete but at the same tym it had so many things to say...

Preet was downright awesome..🤣 Truely truely loved her..🤗

I would hv liked some more arshi scenes but the much u mentioned here...hayeee perfect... God this two can never change.. 😳

The seemingly underlying fun relationship between garima and arnav made me grin wideee...😃

I was rooting for payash when u first started the story but thn gradually i was ok with the fact tht they r not going out together but u made it awesome by making payash the best of friends...👍🏼

I always wanted to read some good college romance on arshi and ur story was just perfect..⭐️

Going to miss this one a lot and sure will be waiting eagerly till u write another story..

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swat.g

@swat.g

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#284

Sorry for not commenting for so long. I read about 4 chapters and epilouge together. And it's been a wonderful slice of college,life and relationships. You are awesome! Keep writing such "jhakaas" stuff.

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rith123

@rith123

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#285

And, unres. It is heer.

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3804994/arhi-ff-the-same-coin-7

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Nutcase

@dreamymaya

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#286

Semanti,

I loved the way you concluded the story - in a beautiful way you have summed it all in few lines.. --"All I know is that Life is awfully uncertain. Sometimes our best laid plans don't work the way we want them to. And sometimes, the least expected hits us out of the blue. Sometimes romance wins. Sometimes practical considerations and insecurities take over. Relationships aren't perfect, because people aren't perfect. But through it all, the vast majority survive and live life with a smile on their face. Primavera is a tribute to that sentiment of taking one day at a time-- of treating each day as a new beginning, a new Spring".

There is a beauty in it and in all the characters of this story. In my opinion, the highlight which I felt in Epilogue two is Preeto-Khushi talk about Siddharth and Khushi's thoughts on how a toddler- Arnav relationship would be. The whole ambiance had a warmth, familiarity and beautiful friendship bond painted in it "Khushi shared a smile of secret complicity with her best friend, and the two lapsed into a comfortable silence, watching the evening sparkle around them."

Such bonds are rare and I felt nostalgic and longing...

Second highlight in my opinion was Payal-Akash friendship. I am glad and surprised and happy to know they went on to become best buddies...Its a nice change and I loved it.

Well, Akash, NK and La has their own mess to deal with, while I am surprised with the maturity Arnav portrayed..Amazed..really!

I should tell this --Garima was still nosy and you know typical Indian mummy..I wish she was cool like Sakshi!

I had loved this whole college romance-evolved into matured lives...Many points crucial, life altering decisions had to be made, people stood together, some lost the game, some won! On the whole, it was refreshing and enlightening story! Which had all the spices in the right proportions!

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#287

That was a beautiful ending.. That talk between Khushi and Preet was so Khushi-ish.. Like her coz I somewhere knew she wud say something similar.. 😆 Payal and Aakash and their friendship.. Like Khushi even I thought abt a "What if".. Maybe coz used to seeing Aakash n Payal together in the show... I loved Khushi and her relationship with her parents.. Just like old times.. And also Arnav Khushi are just where they were.. Teasing and mock anger.. 😆 3 yrs of marriage has changed nothing.. 😆 Shahira has moved on but didnt look like Aakash did.. NK and La too is a complicated case... 🤔 😆For the love of God, Im just glad that ArHi are together even after all the years.. 😆 Towards the end Arnav mimicking and Khushi.. 😆 Just gets better with time...

And what the!! Arnav writes in her diary.. Now that they are married I guess its not a big deal as Khushi makes it.. 😆 Finally the fairytale ends.. It was one, I tell u.. College sweethearts and then so much separation and still going strong.. Well not all can do it.. Lastly Im gonna miss this one like I told last time too I guess..

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Aaradhaya1688

@aaradhaya1688

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#288

Loved the epilogue
This story will be utterly missed

Do pm or scrap me when u write a new story

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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

@Eccentrica

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#289

😭

Reading part 2 of Primavera made me realize how much I missed the lighthearted banter between Khushi and Preeto or Khushi and Payal, the smoldering hot conversation (and many other things) between Arnav and Khushi☺️, the diary (yes, yes the diary is another person in this story) and every other thing that comprises TSC. I liked it, I loved and I'm going to miss it; bas keh diya!

It is closure that a reader expects and once that is provided then only does the feeling of completion is acheived. I completely understand your take on the story and the point wherein you have left it but this chapter left me feeling dissatisfied to some extent.

Did I want to see Arnav and Khushi's kids? No. Would I have preferred for NK and La to have their breakup be announed? Not really. But do I want to know if anything happened past the looks that were exchanged and evaded between Akash and Shahira? A big yes. Your note says that it is all upto our imagination, but please tell me what you think of the two of them. Mere kaan mein hi bataa do...😉

When you ended the captain series, Tales were going on along with Celebrations and a note stating that you would be beginning a new story soon. But there is nothing at the end of this one. Aisa kyun?😕

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sarrahyusuf

@sarrahyusuf

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#290

Wow.. Finally after a long wait.. The story was amazing.. It will be terribly missed till a new tale is written by u. N I am eagerly waitin for tat.. I know I am bein selfish but wat to do u r such an amazing writer.. Love to read ur stories again and again.. Semanti lot of threads were left.. Please do tell us wat happens between Akash n Shankar n also about nk n lavanya.. I know I am askin for more but kya kare yeh dil maanta hi nahi