ArHi FF: The Same Coin#7 - Page 30

beautiful ending

I just re-read ur epilogue for the fourth time. I loved it. It is so cute. Especially the diary bit. But I feel a little disappointed that you left the remaining characters to our imagination.

what can I say. thank you for this wonderful story.

omg.. unliked it.. but lovely update..

amazing epilogue... full story was very beautifully written and had me glued to the thread waiting for updates :) ... will miss it...

Loved the epilogue part b!!

Damn y did this story had to come to an end! It was one of the stories that i enjoyed the most and always looked forward for its update!! I will definitely miss waiting for its update!!

Coming to the update! Loved the update! I remember saying that i was most confident about Nk and La and least about Aman and Payal and then Arnav and khushi! But guess gupta sisters were more into commitment than kashyaps! Sometimes you actually dont know! People whom you are sure of going in to long term commitment end up getting separated and relationships you think woudnt survive beyond a point are able to sustain for long! You never know!

I totally agree when you say life is uncertain! Sometimes romance wins! Sometimes your practical side takes over hour romantic side! Sometimes the romance and love alone may not suffice in sustaining a relationship and some relationships win against all odds!!
Like aman and payal won inspite of so many hurdles whether it was their age gap, or their hesitation or parental disapproval! They were willing to fight for them and won!
Nk and La had everything! Love , understanding, comaptibility but they didnt have what was needed the most! Commitment and thus this relationship couldnt survive!

Akash and shahira both chose to be practical! They knew nothing would happen and didnt even give it a chance! Inspite of having a spark they didnt try to explore it!

N finally Arnav and khushi! They were the lucky ones! They had everything that was needed! And they got whatever they wanted! Unfortunately not all are such lucky!!

Its amazing how you gave us for different type of romantic relationship and how each one of them fared!
I totally loved this aspect of the story! So a hig applause for you semanti!

Secondly i loved preeto and khushi talk! Specially preeto's finding love in her arranged marriage! I really found it cute!

Thirdly! Oh yeah khushi enjoy as much of your marital life as possible! After that it is all gonna be baby sleep, poop, changing diapers( which is not at all enjoyable)medicines, running nose, feed and god knows wat! No m not a mum but a hassled massi who has to look after her toddler niece! So very wise decision khushi arnav though yes it is a different pleasure all together when u see your own features in your miniselves and a toddler wobbling his way , giving a toothy grin! Just make all that worth it!!!

N lastly i loved the subtle arnav garima bond! The way khushi has formed a bond with her MIL arnav too has with his!
Oh the cherry on top was the bonus convestaion ! Khushi's diary entries! Rather khushi arnav's! It was just so hilarious and cute at the same time! Gosh one would love to have such relationship with her husband!!

It was a beautiful journey semanti! Totally loved it! N i specially loved your updates because they were always full of information! You include pretty much of evrything in your updates! Touching on mostly all the subjects! Dealing with almost all the issues! It was more like a convesation between two friends!!

N yeah lastly! I too loved chronicles of kkg!! I hope she continued it too! Firebolt pls hear us and comebk!!

Thanks for writing this fiction sem!!

Loved d epilogue!!!!
Hope to read more of ur work!!!!

Loved it. Very realistic. :)

Preeto's words regarding her husband seem to reflect her need to be needed... it's always nice to be needed and the appreciation she sees in her husband's eyes and his concern for her wellbeing brings her happiness. What's up with mothers and society in general? First they hound one to get married, then they hound one with question as to when one will have kids? Khushi's and Arnav's reasoning for delaying having kids is reasonable... every couple should have kids only when both are ready for it... they shouldn't give in to emotional blackmail. The teasing and serious conversation between Khushi and Preeto is touching as often such convos between close friends helps one clear one's mind and see the path ahead. "...toddler with Arnav's eyes and fantastic nose running around the house, bumping into things. And a frazzled Arnav trying to catch him or her and prevent injuries. An adorable image! He's so sexy when he's that combination of protective and mad." Concur with Khushi and Preeto about Arnav's sexy quotient. Preet grinned widely. "Oh, Mr. Raizada is very attractive, Happiness. And feel free to tell me all about your steamy sex life. I'm shameless and I love talking about inappropriate things." Khushi threw her head back and laughed. "Oh, I have no doubt, Preeto. But I think I'm going to pass. Don't want you carrying tales to Siddhant and giving him performance anxiety." Hilarious, but such natural ribbing between close friends. It's not necessary that all love stories should have happy endings... thank you for keeping it real! So, looks like Shahira is the one who got away an Akash is ruing the fact. Khushi's less than flattering first impression of him and the gradual change in her opinion, and the evolving relationship between Akash and Payal makes for some interesting reading. One can't help but respect Akash for starting afresh and building his reputation from scratch in financial circles. Hope Shahira didn't get involved with Ranvir on the rebound, as in finally moving on when she accepted that Akash had no plans to settle down with her [theirs was supposed to be a no-strings-attached relationship]. Hope she doesn't still yearn for Akash... that would be so cruel to Ranvir. There's a touch of humor to Khushi's fears that Shahira's former and her current beaus might come to blows. The Khushi-Arnav interaction shows how supportive each is of the other and what an understanding relationship is theirs with each having the freedom to be their own self. That the love and desire is still as strong as before is a bonus. That Khushi and her father's relationship has changed for the better is heart-warming. "Exactly. So it is about time you stopped acting like an adolescent teenager, Khushi. Think about how embarrassing it is for your parents that you can't keep your hands off your husband in front of so many other people!" Loved that little twist... thought these were Garima's words when they were actually Arnav's, spoken to tease his wife. While Khushi's eyes glittered dangerously, promising retribution once they were alone, his own lit up, daring her to do her worst... silent conversations between lovers is always endearing. Garima finally feeling a sense of peace and contentment and happy with her daughter and son-in-law is moving. Sad that the NK-Lavanya relationship didn't work out... sometimes, it's difficult for two strong personalities to compromise... even if one of the two frequently does so, soon he or she might start resenting the other for always having to make the effort to save the relationship. ...she is perfectly satisfied with the college romance nature of their relationship... this might keep Lavanya happy for the present, but what happens in a few years' time when she might want companionship? By then it would be too late, and she might not find another person who would love her as much as NK had done. Arnav and Khushi holding a conversation through the diary is sheer genius and heart-warming, at the same time. Nice note to end the story on.

wonderful end :)