Polemic Jackanapes #2: [COMPLETE] Chapter 13-27B - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
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😲 will back for this one
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh my worst fears have turned to be true. What could have been such a big day for arnav has turned into a worst nightmare. He is going to fight for Aman, but this guilt is going to be very difficult to overcome. And khushi can't even share her happiness with him. He is just drifting away.
Excellent! Excellent!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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There is no romance in suicide... Thank you for waiting to post this. Often people who take this step are ofcourse so far separated from hope that they don't realize the devastation they would leave behind... Hope Arnav is smart enough to realize that it was an individual decision and no matter what he may have done or not... There was probably no way of stopping this
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Great chapter as you dealt with his reactions to the chain of events. For someone who struggles with self confidence, this is a huge blow as it will point to his failure in reacting quickly enough. It is human reaction to look for someone to blame and the image in the mirror is the first you see. But hope he will realize quickly that it will be better to do Lavanya justice than to wallow in self pity. With her support he will make sure that Lavanya did not give up her life for nothing, that the culprits who brought her to that precipice will be punished and made an example of so no more women go through that shit. He may just have found his calling if he is a believer in silver lining . . .
Life is too precious to just give up - fight to the last drop. But who knows what frame of mind this abused woman was in and whether she had any support to show her some hope. Cannot judge her without walking a mile in her shoe.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Omg like really my fear came true la committed suicide and aman is in jail. And as said arnav is putting all blame on himself. Gosh things has to get better and happy a big day for both has become a fateful day for him. Excited for the next update . Pls do pm me further updates I wish to read more of it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh Twiggy, this update was gutwrenching!!
You know I always end up saying this to my loved ones: too much fear leads to regret. It's hard to be fearless, but how many wasted opportunities are there because one doesn't take that step to move forward and seize the moment??

Arnav has always had issues...this will exacerbate them even further. Is it his fault? Absolutely not. But he will see it as such and it is an oh so cruel lesson to learn in this way: to have faith in one's self. Lavanya committing suicide...I cannot comment on it. I have never felt such hopelessness that ending my life is the only option. Brave or not brave, it's one's loved ones that are left to suffer. If only she had held on for one more day...

Arnav can wallow or he can fight for Aman. As for Khushi, the way she behaved her makes me deeply resent Anjali's comment that Khushi doesn't care for Arnav in the same way. She knew something was wrong and she came running. The trouble is, will Arnav's lack of confidence and self recrimination come in the way? I gather it will, though I'm not looking forward to it. Couple it with Khushi realising her dream and Arnav's shattered confidence...it's not looking pretty, though I hope you won't leave us readers in misery for too long.. :-)


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Of course, this update had been on a serious note. It spoke about the feeling of let down, feeling of failure, frustration, defeat. The question "What if " "Only if" "I couldn't have" Arnav's feelings was perfectly painted. Self depreciation, doubt, anger...He is a man who had doubts about his ability to help others situations. People believed he can do it, but his confidence level was always bit shaky. By the time, he came to a decision that he can do it, the situation went out of his control.
Often similar situations happen in our lives too. One thing we go to learn from such happenings is that time and opportunities never wait for us. When it present itself in front of us, its an omen, Opportunities present itself in front of us to give us a chance to prove our worth. At times, we fail but then it gifts us an experience as a consolatory prize.

On the other hand, he is lucky to have Khushi by his side. The update also showed how much Khushi loves Arnav. She is his strength!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I m like dumbstruck...and I dont know how to react...
talking of the way it is written like I can feel what arnav n khushi r feeling...how did it all go wrong when it was supposed to be a big day for them...somewhere I had this fear that lavanya is not going to survive but reality is much harsh to bear...
And most of all I m feeling for arnav ...poor man is blaming himself for everything...and lavanya and aman...
Had lavanya been alive ,things would have been pleasant here but now with her being dead and aman in prison,I have no idea of how things will move up, how will arnav save aman,how will aman cope up with lavanya's loss,how will arnav forgive himself and most of all what will happen to arshi when khushi already has so much in her ife to deal with...
and khushi...poor girl is caught in a big storm where everything dear to her is at stake and she has no idea how to defend herself,her love ,how to face this...
must say its an amazing update,the starting of this update and the way emotions ,anxiety,fear,tension,apprehension etc r built here...
plz continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I knew it that something is wrong with aman... Wish things were not how they are... but indeed time doesn't wait for anyone...
It was so painful to see arnav in this state... He is blaming himself... Him being late for one day turned his friend's whole life... but everything is not in our control... I hope Arnav will understand this...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh poor baby! I want to hug Arnav as tightly as I can, hoping to soothe him. But he has Khushi by his side and I'm sure she'll be a perfect balm for him. She has to get him out of this guilt, it would affect his already shaky confidence. I know it's cruel for Aman and Lavanya but things that are meant to be cannot be prevented. If Arnav had rushed his decision it might have marred their case. Arnav shouldn't beat himself. I'm sure that pathetic husband of Lavanya will be punished. There must be something in Law which will put him behind the bars or hang him to death. I wish Arnav would see to it. (Thoda zyada filmy or optimistic ho gaya kya? But I have rosy glasses you know.)
Thanks for the PM and congrats for new thread :)

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