Polemic Jackanapes #2: [COMPLETE] Chapter 13-27B

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tanvia

@tanvia

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

awesome chapter...you know when arnav was delaying i had thought this will be the result...

great feelings displayed abt arnav...loved it

waiting for next

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

fantabulous update

loved it

Congrats for the new thread

thanks for the pm

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RasgullaSP

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Congratulations on the new thread though the mood is anything but happy with this chapter.

I believe this is the best chapter written by you so far.

Khushi's worry at the start, when ArHi meet and their emotions... the words, the simple touches, the understanding... all of it was very well written

I started getting this ominous feeling that Aman's sister might have committed suicide when in the flashback Khushi couldnt reach him knowing he had a meeting with Aman. And when you wrote about his physical state... I was then completely sure... His words only confirmed

I really hope Khushi can help him get over this. Stop himself from taking the blame. He did his best. There is only so much he could do, he is a mere human after all. Arnav anyways has confidence issues. I want Khushi to do something...anything... Flowers and she have the hold on him... Probably I am expecting too much from Khushi but I dont want Arnav to feel to bad a blow from this. Poor baby...

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arpitasharma

@arpitasharma

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

My comment updated here: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/95535624 😳

Edited by arpitasharma - 11 years ago

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Bhool gayi.

@Sanaya.Barun

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Nice chapter!

Hope Khushi would help him..

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manusmithcl

@manusmithcl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Well written. ..tear jerking...hope they will overcome this

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Param

@pup03

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

congrats for new thread !!!

emotional one.. felt bad for arnav.. he really wanted to do something but time was not on his side... not only that arnav cannot stop some thing.. it is really hard time for him and he have to deal with it.. khushi is there to help him.. arnav should take positive steps and shouldn't get into self pity mode and hurt himself and khushi.. loved the update..

thanks for pm

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aquagal

@aquagal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

First of all congratulations on the new thread. Hope there are many more.😊

This was heart-breaking. To think that someone is so hopeless, pessimistic about life that they find nothing in the world worth living - is so heart breaking. Lavanya had no wish to live. It's so difficult to believe it , how one loses all the hopes?

We all are different individuals, deal differently with our break-downs. Just wish people never retort to this last and extreme level of freeing themselves from all the miseries. I personally think it's one moment of extreme depression or weakness when one gives up on their life and if they get someone to hold on to, to talk to in that moment they can keep going with life. It's just sad. nobody is worth it.

Arnav needs to be strong and his real fight begins now. Justice is still left. He has to get Lavanya justice, like he had thought and planned.

It's difficult for both Arnav & Khushi but they'll have to hold each other and move on.