Polemic Jackanapes #2: [COMPLETE] Chapter 13-27B

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.ButterCup.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Congrats on new thread..

Thanks for the pm..

very very heart touching...

feel bad for arnav...

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Kishmish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Khushi's desperation to reach Arnav when she couldn't contact him was so palpable ...

all she could think of was that he should be fine ...

Can totally understand why you did not want to update this chapter during Diwali ... 😕

It is indeed a sad day for Arnav ... had he taken a quick decision on doing this case

Lavanya may have still been alive ... this guilt will stay with him all his life leaving

only regrets behind ...

I just hope he is able to pull himself together and get Lavanya the justice that she

so deserves and gets the culprits punished for the torture they put her through for

ending her precious life ...

Thanks Twiggy ...

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SS88

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

I almost cried while reading this, Twiggy. Now I guess Arnav coud get justice for poor Lavanya but only if he moves past his guilt.

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733619

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#44

That was heart breaking but beautifully written.

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samarablog

@samarablog

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Wow...

its almost the role reversal this time.. it feels so different to see khushi trying to play a strong role and be there for arnav..but of course, seeing miserable arnav is not what we all want, but love ur story..

wow..

wow!..

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divya

@diyadivya

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#46

hei

hav been catchng up vth ds ff

loved it

payal s rt arnav has 2 get through ds on hs own

gd dat khushi s dr fr arnav vn he needs her d most

i really hoped arnav wud take up d case vth flyng colours

plz do pm me fr futr updts

danx

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AquaSandhya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Comment updated Here

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sahada

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

.. heavy!
This is so wrong
You're a brilliant writer V.. Arnav's admission n strength penned down so brilliantly I almost absorbed his pain n regret So much tht I blame him too for letting ths be abt himself.. we ought to b responsible every step of our life There's jus no other way or option
'She felt the back of his palm on her cheek... ' ... 'Because every thought about maa always makes you smile' ... BEAUTIFUL! heartwarming!
I want to slap Arnav for being so strong.. n I want to hug him.. and I want to bring Lavanya back n erase all her miseries... make her leave those monsters n her marriage n seek further education n work n live her life the way every good human deserves to n hav fun n get married for real to a human being n b strong thru it all n never ever look bck n waste another minute second on those worthless beasts for her in laws n husband!!
V it was a heavy update n so I request for the nxt one soon please! I jus can't get it out of my mind It's so incredibly absorbing n unsettling I can't wait to read more!!!

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xxSassyxx

@xxSassyxx

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Enjoying a story that deals with the complexities of being in a relationship - much harder to write about and maintain the audience's interest. Kudos to you.

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sakhter90

@sakhter90

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#50

That was written brilliantly! I feel so sorry for them all. At last when Arnav started believing in himself then this tragedy Occurs. I just hope that he can get past this and continue to fight for lavanya by putting her husband behind bars. Where he belongs.