Polemic Jackanapes #2: [COMPLETE] Chapter 13-27B

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khushboo

@khushboo1234

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#51

first of all congrats on the new thread..

read the last three parts in one go...everything was going gr8..arnav took up the case...payal's and aakash love story was going great too..

khushi's helplessness can be felt... its really annoying when ur loved ones dont pick up the phone...

but i didnt except out of all the situations that lav would commit suicide..

luking forward to the next part twiggy!!

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bhoomigowda

@bhoomigowda

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Finally we get any update after a long time and the chapter was not something which I was looking forward to. I guess khushi's state of mind when arnav was not responding to any of her calls is something each one of us can relate to. Its always difficult when your loved ones don't revert back our call even after repeatedly calling & messaging and more so if we are clueless about their whereabouts and khushi was no exception. Khushi's anxiety over not being able to talk to arnav, her restlessness & pain after the phone conversation, her helplessness during the whole drive, all her emotions were portrayed beautifully.The line where khushi talks about the privilege arnav can gave to her & the flowers to peek inside his mind was simple yet beautiful. Khushi's sweet endearment for arnav and the reason behind it was beautiful & heartwarming, the only thought that came to my mind was can a relationship be more beautiful than it is.I am in total awe each time you show the depth of their relationship. The way both understand each other in & out, the way both can look through each other without voicing it out, the way they reach out for each other standing as pillars in each other's life, everything single thing about them makes me fall more & more in love with them and I believe the best is yet to come.

Lavanya's death was an unpleasant surprise, too be more precise a shocking one. Albeit I had an inkling that something would go wrong, I never thought it to be with lavanya as I had guessed aman to land in trouble since he was not answering arnav's calls but never had I imagined story to take such a sudden turn. It was so heartrending to see arnav recalling the events of the day and more so when he blamed & held himself responsible for everything that happened with la & aman but I guess its important for arnav to understand that few things in life are beyond one's control & all that can be done is, see what best can be done in future to avoid such things from happening again and more importantly arnav should be the one to bring justice to the poor soul. Its truly is his inner battle & he will have to get through it and all khushi can do is be there for him & make sure of it.

It was really very thoughtful of you not to post during diwali as its one of the unpleasant chapter and I guess it was better this way. Thanks for the PM.

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srmirji

@srmirji

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#53

terrible...how unfortunate to carry the burden of wrongs which you have never done..

I feel sad...for arnav, for me and for everyone who miss that destination by one last moment.

time waits for none...ironically very true...we suffer from our actions, words...we can never turn back time and nothing can be undone..

thx for such a meaningful update.

sri

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A_BA

@A_BA

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#54

Updated comment on page 1

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addictedx53

@addictedx53

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#55

It is so sad when a person commits suicide, to let a feeling of helplessness & reaching a dead end overwhelm oneself to such an extent as to make living on a no-option! Arnav's feelings, & Khushi's helplessness in helping him to tide over this is beautifully written. Makes it hard to believe you consider fiction writing difficult!

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N0306

@N0306

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#56

Amazing story... Just keeps you hooked.. Can't even imagine Arnav's plight.. Poor guy..

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kondhili

@kondhili

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#57

Something big was definitely in the offing but Suicide was something i never ever expected. I can understand fully now your reasons for delay in updating this.

Though i feel sorry for the helpless situation that Lavanya felt she was in but i strongly feel that there are other answers to complex questions/problems of life. Suicide is taking the easy way out, well atleast for me. You need to step away and think of your loved ones before even thinking about this.

Khushi's pain at not knowing arnav's whereabouts was palpable. I am glad that khushi was there with Arnav at his hour of need. What next now?

Waiting eagerly for the next update.

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Amanram

@Amanram

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#58

SUPERB! This has been dealt with really sensibly. I really hope that Arnav can get out of this debacle without too many scars but enough experience to build on and move on with Khushi. they really need each other at this point in time. For every low there is always a high and you have to believe that!

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Nandz

@Nandz

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#59

Sorry for this late comment!

See this is what we all were scared of! Finally after so much deliberation Arnav had prepared himself for this chance, but fate blew it away! N he is bound to feel like that ! Gulit ridden, miserable, down but arnav dnt blame yourself! It just takes a minute, a moment for life to get changed and same happened here!

But in all this what i really liked was how khushi was there for him. With every subsequent chapter my liking for khushi's chatacter is increasing, specially when i see her commitment towards arnav and her love for him. I remember in one the earlier chapters anjali had expressed her concern and doubt regarding khushi's commitment towards this relationship. At that time a tiny seed of doubt had sprouted in my mind too. But in every update i see how deeply she feels for him. The depth of her feelings show in her every gesture whether its her incessant need to share her thoughts, happiness or concern with him or how much his opinion matters to him or like today how she couldnt rest till she had talked to him!!

I so so love their relationship! Its simply amazing and beautiful!!!

I hope she is always there with him , helping him fight his inner battles.

Loved the chapter!!

Thanks for the pm!