Polemic Jackanapes #2: [COMPLETE] Chapter 13-27B

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Pdrover

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1001

Awesome update
Happy for Anjali & hope she stick to her new resolve
Sad for payash

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headtotoe

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1002

Hey Twiggy !!

Sorry for being late.. I was unwell and hospitalised... Now i am back with the comment...

Amongst all the casual conversations and baters a lot of important things were discussed and decisions were made..

Like the fact that Anjali finally understood shortcoming of her life and decided to go her way to make it look better... Here also she made her family the reason for her decision but atleast she has taken the first step...

Why is Akash behaving awkward??? Cant he just understand a simple thing that you just cant hold back the desires and aspirations of the person for an excuse of the relationship. Relationship is important but at the end of the day, individual growth grows paralelly.

Love the understanding and chemistry between Arnav and Khushi !!!

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@flowers4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1003

awesome update ... i think payal and akash really need a break...continue soon

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sincereme

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1004

Awesome update...

I m happy for Anjali that she decided to go... Sacrificing your happiness for someone who doesn't acknowledge your efforts is not worth it... Glad that finally she realize that its only her to can bring her happiness, her peace back... Loved her...

Don't know what to say about Payash... Their relationship is at a point where it is causing distress than peace... Its seem like that they are fighting for dominance... And in this way they are better without each other...

Loved Arnav and Khushi... ❤️...

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Mirabell

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1005

Oh Twiggy

First, apologies for such a late post.

I loved this one - I am so glad that your Anjali has decided to be a person of her own right rather than someone's something - Shyam's wife, daughter-in-law .. I loved the reflection she went through - it made sense.. it began with a melancholy but moved through critical self scrutiny and then to liberation and joy.. I absolutely loved the way you phrased it - you called it "delusional optimism." It made so much sense. I am so happy that she is going on that tour!! Yippee Anjali!! :)

Khushi and Arnav were not center-stage here.. and it worked here. There is one thing that struck me - Arnav's discomfort with Khushi being a student.. :) That was well done - These small nuanced glimpses into your characters' psyche is just so well done.

Now - Akash and Payal seem to be in a very bad rut. Is he being purposefully dense? Is she being purposefully insensitive? Or do they not realize that they are on the same team, fighting something together? Separation anxiety? Fear of loss? I felt like bonking their heads after reading this today.. or putting up a mirror so they can see themselves..