Polemic Jackanapes #2: [COMPLETE] Chapter 13-27B

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Camb

@Camb

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Posted: 11 years ago

#111

Beautiful banner for the beasutiful story - very well done :)

And the update, as much natural as it could get, brilliant one. And i am glad you proved me wrong to some extent - i was thinking that Arnav might shut Khushi completely off, that has not happened and he is still listening to her. The way he answers and says that he has answered the questions in her head says it all - how much they understand each other and the relationship they share, and you put this forward in the most natural way - hmm, i have no idea why i am using this word 'natural' somany times - but i am feeling thats the best word in the world right now!!!

I like Khushi very much, she is trying to put things logically, i agree anyone in Arnav's place would feel guilty, but what Khushi says makes more sense - you weren't able to avoid what has happened, but you can make things right at least by a bit by giving justice to the death, Arnav can still take the case and fight for Lavanya/Aman and get Lavanya's in-laws a reasonable sentence for what they did, and if he doesn't do it then they will aim for another girl and that girl may do the same thing in the future - so instead of drowning in the guilt, get the justice to what all happened and save another poor girl from Layanya's in-laws, make this a best example for people in the society in both ways - for in-laws with bad intentions this will be a warning and a message for poor girls (who give up hope) to not to commit suicide and ask/fight for justice.

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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

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Posted: 11 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: Camb

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If a sleepy Saiyu can write this nice long comment then what a wide awake Saiyu can do?, i can't imagine - nice comment with a lot of thought, i can't agree enough with you.

Yes, another FF where i am going to look for your comments sweetheart :)!

Another FF where now I will be nail biting nervous. What have you done to me Camb? 😉

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Shruti Gupta

@Shruti21

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Posted: 11 years ago

#113

I took ages to come here drop my two cents sorry about that had been terribly busy with papers.. i thought i will get some free time after papers but realized study time was better office sucks...

I hate saying this but i have no time to re-read the starting chapters😭 i had so much to say for every chapter but i will have to wind up everything in one comment..🤢😭

Your title- can you explain what it means and why this name only??Are you sure this is not your first story?? because i highly doubt, how you got the whole idea?? any inspiration because though this is just a story but i can connect myself with your story seriously, something happened first time on IF

Here arnav-khushi are not inspired from IPK, this story has a flavor of real life...your leads are like character bought from some real world..things are not hyped and imaginary like arnav owing BMW and MANSION and AIRCRAFT etc etc etc

I can relate myself with your arnav😆 a person with no extra-ordinary talents but still happy and content with her life.. though your arnav don't know this that his love for others makes him special but i know this hehehe..😳😛 In fact i told this to one of my friend she was like "shruti we don't have any talents where we excel, than i told her we are special because we love others and talent mein toh we are going to excel in ca world"

So i can't thank you enough for writing this story trust may be one day after leaving IF we may forget what we read but i will never forget your story..kabhi nahi..

abhi k liye i need to get back to my work.. wapas aa k phir likhti hu..😳

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..SunnYaara..

@..SunnYaara..

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#114

awesome...the way khushi trying to get arnav out from his guilt was superb and to the top wat i love the most is inspite of taruma he is going through he asked khushi wat she wants to share...it was soo lovely he understands her more than her...i get tears reading their selfless love u shown hope he take up this case and win it...and hope aman co operate with arnav to fight this case...fabulous yaar...thanks for pm

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Sonia

@sonia_92

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#115

oh he seems miserable ... that blame, of someone else's death on his head, its just wrong, its definitely not his fault. I just hope khushi helps gik out of this misery

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janu

@Janu75

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#116

This update leaves me speechless how well these two are gelled together in moments of dark and happiness.No resentment on part of Arnav hearing khushi's progress shows his character and just as khushi thinks if she is capable of such selfless love ,it reminds me Anjali's views on her.She is indeed a perfect match for him trying to pull out of guilt,darkness what not Arnav is engulfed in.

As far as Arnav is concerned he just needs some time to rethink his strategy vowing to recent developments .

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#117

Thank you for a lovely update Twiggy ... 😃

Can totally understand Arnavs state of mind at the moment ... 😕

but then in such a case only regrets get left behind ... if only ... sigh ...

domestic violence destroys any confidence a person has in themselves ...

Lavanya's confidence seemed at the lowest ebb ... being in a totally fragile state of

mind ... hence suicide seemed the only way out to end this torture ... 😲

maybe if he had not taken so long to decide in taking up this case then perhaps

things would have been totally different ...

but he himself did not have the confidence in himself whether he would be able to

handle this case or not ...

Khushi made sure that she was there with Arnav offering him the comfort and emotional support that he so needed at the moment ...

she was like a rock ... forgetting her own happiness ...

I only hope that she is able to help in making him get over his guilt and not let

it bog him down and move forward ...

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Param

@pup03

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#118

can understand pain arnav is going... come on arnav get up.. khushi is right what have happened have happened there are so many things you can do.. truly feels arnav should to to help his friend aman get his bail and then do something of those in human in-laws.. arnav should avoid dark... fabulous update.. loved it.. both arnav and khushi are each other's strong support system... hope they stay like this.. always..

thanks for pm 😊