Polemic Jackanapes #2: [COMPLETE] Chapter 13-27B

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Nandz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#121

Unres here

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sahada

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Posted: 11 years ago

#122

:) these two are sooo good for eachother n so healthy... smart mouth IS essential for a healthy strong relationship.. btwn any two ppl.. esp the ones where one is relying on the other completely for tht kind of constant support despite all.. There are flaws n there are if's n but's BUT ths seems n feels perfect.. ths two are doing great for eachother n themselves too n tht's ALL tht matters... they're trying n fighting for the other whn there's immense uncertainty within.. thAt counts the most!
BEAUUTIFUL INCREDIBLY ENRICHING N SO VERY HEARTWARMING ths update inspite of all the monsters hiding n some buried within... It was absolute delight to read ths Ch (=
thaaank youuu for sharing your great work n talent of amazing AMAZING enriching writing... I love love ABSOLUTELY LOVVVE your writing n ths story n ths Ch too (X !!!!

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@flowers4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#123

awesome update...hope arnav takes kushis advice ...great story...keep it up

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moomin4455

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Posted: 11 years ago

#124

You have blown me away again with this chapter!

I completely understand how Arnav feels - everyone has the right to reflect, to wallow and to be unhappy with themselves...for a bit. I am with Khushi though; he has plenty he can do to help Aman right now and to bring the In-Laws to justice for the way they behaved with Lavanya. He can make this the regret that breaks him or which ultimately makes him into the man he wants to be. Wallowing will let the family who tortured Lavanya wreak the same havoc on some other poor girl. Aman is so alone...Arnav can be there for him and by helping him bring his life on track. By doing so, maybe one day he can accept that Lavanya's death was not his fault...

The love between these two brings a smile on my face; Khushi's opportunity made Arnav so happy, while Khushi cannot appreciate her happiness while Arnav is suffering. This one event has the potential to affect their relationship, but I hope they weather any storms they face together.

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ShikhaKhushi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#125

Aww! The way they are together is sooo sweeet! <3

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shr1234

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Posted: 11 years ago

#126

I loved Khushi tried to pull him off his guilt trip. It's hard to bear whatever Arnav has faced and true to his nature he feels guilty. But like Khushi said it's time to help Aman. Of course Arnav has Khushi for him. I'm all in love with this lovely mature couple :)

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SS88

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Posted: 11 years ago

#127

Beautifully written, Twiggy.In all this sadness it's my hope that Arnav will find his purpose, his calling. Khushi, you're wonderful. I wish she was real so I could be friends with her.

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sincereme

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Posted: 11 years ago

#128

Awesome update...

Arnav is not coming out of his guilt after so much effort and reasoning of khushi... And its impossible for him ti forget everything so soon... But brooding over what happened will not give him any good... He can't change the past but can change what's going ti happen next... At this time Aman needs him... So his first priority should have to be that...

Continue soon...

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amaypranay

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Posted: 11 years ago

#129

Khushi...is so good...she's so there for him...and the support and encouragement is commendable...

They both are so perfect for each other...He was so happy for her...their love is very strong and very pure...Twiggy...amazingly written...this story has so much meaning to it... ..very engrossing and very interesting...

Thx..Twiggs!