Ashlok FF: My Heart Whispers, but I can't Hear...Part-1 to Part-19

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#461

Originally posted by: namratavyas
Very nice update.. like the fact that he feels that it was the not the first time he felt her lips :-)

Thanks a lot dear..ya finally he felt, he didn't touch her for the first time...

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#462

Originally posted by: Amna1234567890
Awesome update.. I was waitn 4 ur update.,
Nw I hv 2 wait till 2mrw 4 the next part.. 😭
Update soon

Thanks a lot dear... just wait for 24 hours more...will try to update tomorrow...

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Ladygirl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#463

Originally posted by: jeenia123

Thanks a lot dear... ya it was really difficult to write the scene as you want to visualize it..for yourself and for others...
I just tried... succeeded or not , readers may tell...

Oh, don't worry you really met the mark. I'm sure the rest of the readers will agree with me. 😉

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#464

Originally posted by: Ladygirl
Oh, don't worry you really met the mark. I'm sure the rest of the readers will agree with me. 😉

Thanks a lot dear...

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Serviana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#465

Beautiful update...waiting to see how the story will go on😃

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@MereMahiyaa.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#466

Waaauw amaaazing yaaar whaat a updateee loveeed it

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#467

Originally posted by: Serviana
Beautiful update...waiting to see how the story will go on😃

Thanks lot dear... hope yo will like it further too...

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#468

Originally posted by: .Siham.
Waaauw amaaazing yaaar whaat a updateee loveeed it

Thanks a lot dear...

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latha_555

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Posted: 11 years ago

#469

nice update, glad he is starting to remember, and i like how varun and gauri are kind of protecting aastha from when shlock gets physically close to her.

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#470

Originally posted by: latha_555
nice update, glad he is starting to remember, and i like how varun and gauri are kind of protecting aastha from when shlock gets physically close to her.

Thanks a lot dear... ya they are true friends for both of them...