Ashlok FF: My Heart Whispers, but I can't Hear...Part-1 to Part-19

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jeenia123

@jeenia123

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#451

Originally posted by: sireesha76
Really wonderful update yaaar
Interesting, waiting for next update

Thanks a lot dear...

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ANAM

@khuwahish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#452

Ooo... AWESOME...⭐️
AS USUAL...

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Ladygirl

@Ladygirl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#453

wonderful update, especially describing the fire part. It is not easy to word these type of scene, like in movie we see them visually. You are an awesome writer. Keep the update going.

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Roshani

@lively_roshani

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#454

oh i love the way of story awesome

Edited by roshanii - 12 years ago

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NamuVyas

@NamuVyas

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#455

Very nice update.. like the fact that he feels that it was the not the first time he felt her lips :-)

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jeenia123

@jeenia123

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#456

Originally posted by: LECHU123
today lechu first
superb superb superb👏 👏 👏
shlok cares for astha a lot
and his awkwardness and confusions😳
loved it...this update have a special jeenia touch
loved it...

Thanks a lot dear...and too many persons clapping for me.. haye main to mar jaun khushi se...😉

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jeenia123

@jeenia123

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#457

Originally posted by: khuwahish
Ooo... AWESOME...⭐️
AS USUAL...

Thanks a lot dear...😊

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jeenia123

@jeenia123

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#458

Originally posted by: Ladygirl
wonderful update, especially describing the fire part. It is not easy to word these type of scene, like in movie we see them visually. You are an awesome writer. Keep the update going.

Thanks a lot dear... ya it was really difficult to write the scene as you want to visualize it..for yourself and for others...
I just tried... succeeded or not , readers may tell...