Fortress around the heart~ViSa and RaVya FF~Part 36 updated pg 68 - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: nandinidavid96

Nice Update👍🏼

Akduji didn't hear the actual conversation😡...I'd love to read cold and ruthless Vikrant ...go ahead Pallavi. Keep Posting😊



Thank you, dear!

Had he heard it, my FF would be done in the next 2 chapters! 🤣 😆
I am trying to built up angst, anxiety, romance and love gradually for RaVya and ViSa!

Hope I do a good job of it! Hehe

Thanks once again for reading and for your encouraging comments! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amaaazingg!! I wish VIkz had noticed Sarita's happy face as she left Raj.. I mean how can he be so dumb in the show!? Anyways awesome update.. Keep dem coming :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful update👍🏼 Happy Diwali Pallavi😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ARS24

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awesome update akka
wondres wat will happens next !!
update soon
thank u for pm



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Aww, thank you so much for the Deepavali greetings, dear! 😳 😳 Unakkum, unga familykkum deepavali nalvazhthukkal, kanna! 😃

Thank you for your great comments, dear! 😊

I will be uploading another chapter tonight...
Hint...RaVya! God give me the strength and emotional stamina to write this fic! 😆 Never felt this drained of emotional energy, not even when I built up courage to express love to my hubbydear, the first time! LOL!😆 😆
Edited by wupa - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
v ncie dear... i wish there is some visa romance coming up...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: Priyamvada

amaaazingg!! I wish VIkz had noticed Sarita's happy face as she left Raj.. I mean how can he be so dumb in the show!? Anyways awesome update.. Keep dem coming :)



Thank you, Priya!

I agree! Yesterday's show had too many loopholes. And here I was nervous about how I would write the confrontation in my FF. In fact I was unhappy about my update yesterday, LOL! Now I do not feel so bad after all! The cvs screwed it up more than I did! 🤣 🤣

My advice to cvs...if you want to create the MU between ViSa, atleast apply logic to that one episode where you actually start the MU!😆

The cvs could have done a better job if their goal was to deliberately create the MU between ViSa, as Nandini pointed out.
ETA: A very happy deepavali to you and your family, Priya! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: anjalijiji

Beautiful update👍🏼 Happy Diwali Pallavi😊



Thank you, Anjali! And a very happy deepavali to you and your family as well! 😳 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh shit..I typed such a long comment and it got deleted..arrghhh dese touch screen fones..lol..
okay I missed d last chapter...
I read both of them now..
and they r super..
exactly like wat I wanted to see..

Killing and murder shurder seems too extreme..
im not denying tings like dese do happen..
I was talking to my mom d other dat and she told me dat she had a frnd who had dis over obsessive and short tempered husband..who wud hate if she met her guy frnds and wud beat her up..but dis was likelong back..
but vikrant who has been shown so sensible..though a lil short tempered..but has a super emotional side when it comes to abhi and bow anything or anyone related to sarita..
and for one moment I can relate to d anger where he picks up a revolver..but once d feeling sinks in dat wat he is doing is wrong..not only legally..but he would hurt his son beyond repair..he wud actually destroy abhimaan as he wud take away his mother and d law wud take away his father and d other people around him are not very kind hearted either (read vandana kajal rohan)
So I do not agree wid and cannot relate to him trying to kill sarita again..
but yes I love how in ur story he has built a fortress around his heart again..bcoz dat is totally understandable..relatable and definitelt not over d top..
And now im intrigued how sarita slowly makes way to his heart again..

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: wupa



Thank you, dear!

Yes, this is my first shot at writing a fic. I think I should thank the cvs for making me write it. Since they did not show what I wanted to see on my screen, especially where laying foundation for story, characters and plot was concerned, I resorted to writing this fic, penning down my version of it! LOL!

Thank you for the appreciation! Gives me the necessary boost to continue writing.

Vandy the vulture does deserve a slap. Not now, but a little later, I hope! 😉

I am in fact damn scared to write the Sarit-raj-vikrant confrontation. I am constantly wondering whether I would be able to cover all the bases and do justice to it. Hehe 😆

I totally agree with you that both the leading ladies are in for lots of heartbreak and agony. I just wish that we get to see Divya's POV as well along with Sarita's. Parul and srishty are fantstic actors who would knock it out of the park with their brilliant performances! The precap was indeed heartwrenching to watch!😭

This is probably the first show where I love all the 4 leads! 😃

More than writing, it is penning down the emotions of the characters that drains my energy! 😆

Will try to post another chapter by nightfall.
THANKS once again for reading and commenting! 😃


I didnt see ur reply too.. :(
And madam now u shudnt be feeling dat bad abt d confrontation..u did a very good job..definitely better than d show makers..lol

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: raja.rani

v ncie dear... i wish there is some visa romance coming up...



Thank you, dear! 😃
I have to warn you that misunderstandings and angst, with some romance from Sarita's end are coming right up for ViSa! Because the state Vikrant is in right now, romance is far far away from his mind! 😉

But will definitely keep your comment in mind while writing ViSa! 😳 😃


A very happy deepavali to you and your near and dear! 😃
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