Fortress around the heart~ViSa and RaVya FF~Part 36 updated pg 68 - Page 5

wow...Pallavi amazing update👍🏼

Originally posted by: nandinidavid96

wow...Pallavi amazing update👍🏼

From the start I was missing Vikrant and you put him at the end holding revolver as Pierce Brosnan...hope he wont shoot any one.

Sarita forgiving Raj so easily is just natural, she is one like that. I am waiting to read your take on Vikrant and Sarita confrontation and of course Divya-Raj

Please Update ASAP

Thank you, dear! 😳

LMAO @ Pierce Brosnan comment. BTW, he is one of my favourite actors! Fell in love with him since Remington Steele!

I am very bad at writing confrontations and conversations. I am better off writing monologues, I feel! LOL! Feel free to correct me when I go wrong! 😃

Frankly spwaking, I was not that happy about this update. But what I wanted to put accross was Raj and Sarita moving on from their past, shedding their baggage to make a fresh start. I think this conversation was very essential for the story to progress further.

Hope I write the next part better! After all it is going to be a ViSa chapter! 😉 😃

wow pallavi akka 🤗

Beautiful update. So true about Raj never knowing what Sarita really wants, when she wanted to be with him he wanted her to do the punar vivah ,when she wants to be with vikrant and abhi raj wants her to elope with him. Eagerly waiting for the next part👍🏼😊

Wow!! Jus read everything, all the parts are awesome! Update soon Pallavi. U r doing an amazing job..


btw.. r u telugu coz I saw someone here calling u akka. Lemme know.

Love,
Priya.

Originally posted by: wupa

Thank you, dear! 😳

LMAO @ Pierce Brosnan comment. BTW, he is one of my favourite actors! Fell in love with him since Remington Steele!

I am very bad at writing confrontations and conversations. I am better off writing monologues, I feel! LOL! Feel free to correct me when I go wrong! 😃

Frankly spwaking, I was not that happy about this update. But what I wanted to put accross was Raj and Sarita moving on from their past, shedding their baggage to make a fresh start. I think this conversation was very essential for the story to progress further.

Hope I write the next part better! After all it is going to be a ViSa chapter! 😉 😃

Originally posted by: ARS24

wow pallavi akka🤗

awesome update

thank u for sending me the pm !!!!

Aww, Romba thanks Aruna! 😃 Glad that you like it, girlie!

You are welcome! 😃

Originally posted by: anjalijiji

Beautiful update. So true about Raj never knowing what Sarita really wants, when she wanted to be with him he wanted her to do the punar vivah ,when she wants to be with vikrant and abhi raj wants her to elope with him. Eagerly waiting for the next part👍🏼😊

Thank you, dear! I agree with you. Infact no one ever made an effort to understand her or know what she wanted. That was why she was so overwhelmed with joy to see the effort Vikrant put in, to surprise her. One small gesture and she was so damn happy! It did not happen for the 10 years she was wih Raj. Now that it happened and she is happy about it and falling for her husband, he thinks otherwise about her. I felt so sad for her 😭 in yesterday's episode!

I am so glad that you are enjoying the fic! Thank you for your encouraging comments! 😃

Originally posted by: Priyamvada

Wow!! Jus read everything, all the parts are awesome! Update soon Pallavi. U r doing an amazing job..


btw.. r u telugu coz I saw someone here calling u akka. Lemme know.

Love,
Priya.

Thank you so much for your appreciation, Priya! 😊
I am from chennai and I speak both telugu and tamil! :)
Do you speak telugu as well?

Originally posted by: alekhika20

Wow,beautiful updt.
Cont soon.

Thank you, dear! 😃