An ArHi SS: Seduction *Thread One* (COMPLETED)

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dumas

@dumas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#261

AMAZING START LOVED ARNAV REACTION TO SEEING HER HE IS SO TAKEN BY HER LOVED HOW SHE IMPRESSED THE KASHAPS AND ARNAV SCOLDING AMAN BECAUSE HE TURNED KHUSHI AWAY BECAUSE SHE DID NOT HAVE THE EXPERIENCE LOVED THAT HE DECIDE TO GIVE HER A CHANCE AWESOME UPDATE BRILLIANT THANKS FOR THE PM

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beenish

@beenish248

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Posted: 11 years ago

#262

simply superb man ...

loved it yarr ..

eagerly waiting

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Nishi

@Ni_singh

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#263

very interesting prologue and chapter 1...waiting for the next update...

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mem1

@mem1

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#264

OMG! Do I really need to tell you that I loved it. The start was dhamaakedaar! just a mere glimpse...not even a full view and they are already smitten by each other.

I have to say this Arnav is very intriguing. Why is he trying to be alone,. what's with the solitude? the greyness. wanting to live in the housekeepers' room rather than stay away from Sheesh Mahal. and he is secretive too. He was surprised that she knew who he was. Why is he trying to hide? what is he hiding from?

Khushi in this story is spectacular. She is Khushi with color and chamak, and is so bold! Not afraid to talk to him when he came upon her at the poolside. Not afraid to ask what was on her mind. Not even afraid to tell him what was on her mind.
She is of course smart and knowledgeable. so why was she not working already? why did she quit the previous job in a hurry?

Lavanya was cool without the attitude... I love her...NK serious? That is new. will have to wait and see how that pans out!!

Aman was what we all expect him to be. no surprises there, yet!

I am loving this story and of course, can't wait to read the next chapter. I will assume that the woman on the phone was his Di or Nani. So I won't worry about that, for now!

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Bavari

@Bavari

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#265

Amazing update. Curious to know what Khushi is trying to do and who's the lady called Arnav.I think it's Anjali.waiting for Saturday.

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#266

oh God, when did this happen

juhi, how come i missed it

excited to read - will read now

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#267

congo congo juhi on the new story

the magic is on - lovely start juhi

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hmm.. guess karo :P

@jas0308

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#268

superb starting juhi

arnav's irresistible attraction to khushi is so strong but I having some kind of inkling that there's more in their relation, maybe their past!!

why arnav is living in house keeper's quarters? there is something there In him as well as khushi which is intriguing me..

loved khushi and lavanya's meet and how khushi become her "chamkeeli"

oohh.. stern NK.. Well that's something!!

loved arshi's first real meet and their talk, especially arnav's monologues

who was other side of the phone? what happen over past one year!!

so damn beautifully written.. and beautifully described everything

cant wait for these mystery to solve!!!

continue soon😊

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luvbug

@luvbug

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#269

wow vry beautiful chapter... are they some how connected by past?? there is definitely a pull towards eachother... it seemed like they dont know each other but im confused :D

y did she need this job ...y now after so many years... what happened in the last 1 yr with arnav?