An ArHi SS: Seduction *Thread One* (COMPLETED)

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nyxx

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Posted: 11 years ago

#241

Ahhh, Now I get why you said that every chapter would end with a cliffhanger, something that would occupy your mind and thoughts until the next chapter would be up...Who called?

and than, then inexplainable connection and attraction between Arnav Singh Raizada and Khushi Kumari Gupta...Tell me, Why do I feel like that they've known each other before, and they are just picking up from where they left off...ooze of comfort, surprises I'd say!

Lovely Update! i look forward to reading more of this!

Sheesh Mahel will be shining in its glory in no time...the laughters, the smiles and the late night walks in the cool breeze are just the beginning...

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arnshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#242

Beautiful..while reading the chapter I felt like being woven in a mystery...brilliant...and yes eagerly waiting for next.

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mishti_17

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Posted: 11 years ago

#243

Nice update Juhi.. Khushi has come... And Lavanya and she have kinda become good friends.. And ArHi meeting.. Loved it.. Wonder what happened in the past 1 yr.. Looking forward to the next update...

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inspiringstars

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Posted: 11 years ago

#244

Nice, brilliant 1st chapter.

I will have to read again and properly analyze, but I love how you lay the ground work for all characters, not revealing much but giving enough for us to keep pondering.

Loved the scene of the night, you are right, the scene itself was seducing us into it, pulling us into the magic of the night. It was all very magical.

Cant wait to read more.

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Livania Govender

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Posted: 11 years ago

#245

I've gotta say that im highly confused. How does khushi know arnav?
Do they share a past? If so, why doesnt arnav know her? And why was khushi staying all bottled up till now?
All these questions.

U capture their emotions perfectly. U havd me hooked and eager to know what happens next.

Loving it. Update soon...

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lala rukh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#246

awesome awesome and simply damn awesome :)...wow ...wt a beautiful story it is...loved this arnav and loved even more this khushi...so confident thank GOD no shyness or clumpsy one...very very different character...even i fall in love with her...and arnav ,he thank goodness not rude towards her...there is something in the story which touched heart ...although its first chap ...but me falling for it :)...awesome juhi