UN-EFFING-BELIEVABLE.
I would say worse but IF would censor me and wash my mouth out with soap and water.
STILL RES.
P.S. Expel. You. Just. You. Wait.
UNRES
I was almost not going to edit. DAN I ask myself who I'm kidding.
Way to be mysterious, Expel. And give nothing away in the Prologue.
So let's see, what DO we know?
1) We know that Arnav Singh Raizada has bags of money, is the current owner of Sheesh Mahal, and has suddenly evinced interest in renovating it after two decades of neglect.
2) Arnav Singh Raizada hasn't been around for TWENTY years. That leaves the possibility of an older Arnav. Like older than the 30-33 age bracket wala Arnav we usually see.
3) Khushi is creating a facade of vibrancy. Of colour, youth, and maybe even innocence. This Khushi sounds older too. With her talk of having worked with Art for a long time. And it sounds like she's been hiding almost. From whom or what, is anybody's guess.
4) OHMYGOD DETAILING OF LUCKNOW CRAFTS. Looney is absolutely right. I lau it when stories give a deeper insight into the background and the actual work that is done-- especially in terms of traditional crafts.
5) So it seems to me that A and K do not share a history here. Or maybe they do. Too early to tell.
I expect you to answer the following kostins soonish.
a) Why has A been living away for 20 years and why has he come back all of a sudden and expressed interest in Sheesh Mahal?
b) Why has K been hiding away (and what) for so long? Why is her appearance important?
OHMYGOD. IS KHUSHI A WIDOW? Is that why she doesn't wear colours and jewelry but is wearing them now for this job? Because for some reason it is important to not come across as a widow here?
You've opened Pandora's Box, Expel.
Now get ready to deal with everything you've unleashed.
This is going to be Luna's and mine new chill-out place.
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