An ArHi SS: Seduction *Thread One* (COMPLETED)

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bc1972

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Posted: 11 years ago

#281

You have me hooked! What a lovely start! Thanks for starting yet another brilliant story...can't wait for what lies ahead!

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kclovearshi

@kclovearshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#282

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First thing I noticed is Arnav's melancholy, there must be a strong reason to leave home at the age of thirteen!! Nice to have Aman, as his trusted confidant, but he did make a mistake in turning Khushi away is it? You subtly show how Arnav has the ability to read between the lines and choose. His decision and instincts were right when he told Aman what to do or how to do it. Khushi turned out to be the right person for the job.!

Hmm Lavanya and NK are a couple, so she is no longer a threat to KKG 😉 Now we know how the name Chamkeeli cane into existence 😉

A & K's conversation, a prelude for things to follow later 😛 Khushi's confidence way of talking is impressive as opposed to the demure one we have seen before.!!

Arnav already is experiencing the magnetic pull towards her 😳 He wanted to coninue but didn't know why 😉

And the woman on the phone, if I were to guess, Nani, Di or Sheetal or Ma (for a change)

And something happened last year which now we have to wait to find out until Saturday if we are lucky (I mean it could be revealed after 4/5/6 updates??)

Cheers

Edited by kclovearshi - 11 years ago

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pmpm1

@pmpm1

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#283

So Khushi and Arnav didn't know each other from before... I thought that was a possibility after reading the prologue... In any case, I'm glad that they are starting on a fresh slate... not sure why though... 😆

And you are really going to stick to your promise about the cliff hangers, aren't you?

Great update!

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-DobByDoDgeR-

@-DobByDoDgeR-

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#284

Sooo
Is started, huh?
The BOOM cliffhangers
Although the few chapters always seem like a cliffy to me
But anyway
Obviously lots of question i have for you
But unfortunately for obvious reasons you wont be answering them
I loved the new story
Awesome andi cant wait for more

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meera06

@meera06

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#285

...There is so much mystery around both of them but it looks like they are meeting for the first time..

I know you did say that there will be cliff hangers but I am dying to know the whole mystery.But then that's the beauty of your stories ,there is suspense till the end.

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kclovearshi

@kclovearshi

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#286

Updated my comments here 😛

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Pavina

@Pavina

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#287

omg...so much of curiosity building...so much of doubta...i knw that i need to wait...but wen had i evr learn to b patient??? i was so glad to c u r writin yet anothr story...n aftr shhaterd i really was misin it... i hv a feelin khushi knws smthn dat arnav diesnt...did they know each other bfore?? n who xctly was that on fone??anjali or may b sumone else n wat hapnd 1yr back... cant wait for the nxt update

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#288

Fabulous start ... loved the setting of the story ...

Intrigued by this mysterious connection between Arnav and Khushi ...

A reclusive Arnav and a peppy Khushi ...

he in the usual dark attire and she in bright colours ...

and the magnetic pull they have towards each other ...

Oh and not to forget the cliffhanger ending that you left us with ...

Thanks Juhi ... waiting eagerly for more on Seduction ...

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321abc

@321abc

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Posted: 11 years ago

#289

Amazing prologue and Chapter one, I love the concept of the story revolving around sheesh mahal and the different personalities of arnav and khushi. I liked arnav and khushis first meeting. I cant wait to read more I really want to know who the woman Arnav was talking to.

Thanks for the pm :)