Swaron Os- Back to us again updated part 3 on page 9 - Page 9

Originally posted by: Mihi4VruShan

Read but too lazy to comment😆Will get back to it soon.

Awww cmon mhan will take just 5 mins mihi yaar.. Unreserve kar do yaar..😛

chapter 3 was beautiful and outstanding... loved it...
finally sharon did get back swayan and now both are in laila and manu
so sweet and cute romantic...

Originally posted by: sweetydiyafrien

chapter 3 was beautiful and outstanding... loved it...
finally sharon did get back swayan and now both are in laila and manu
so sweet and cute romantic...

Thank you so much dear..😊. I'm glad you liked it..

res ❤️

Hey Kashmi

Originally posted by: pratik54000

Hey Kashmi

This was as amazing piece of work. You actually took me by surprise while reading this because this was just so well written that it was easy to imagine the visuals of what you have written on SwaRon. I must say you are a marvel when it comes to writing. Never stop writing i guess you will earn lots of fans just because of your writing skills...

And now coming to the Part 3 well i can only say that it was very nice because Sharon really climbed the pipe just to convince the Majnu that he still holds the most important place in her heart that could really be what you call madness at its peak when you are head above heels in love with someone.

And to add the cherry on the cake this was written in the point of view of Sharon so it made it really special. Generally we see stories being told from general pov or Swayam's pov but there are only few who write Sharon's POV this nicely. You surely find place in those very few for emoting Sharon so well.

Everything from the start where Sharon expressed herself to the conversation she had with Swayam and then getting back and the happiness that climbed in her heart when Swayam responded her back was so nicely expressed and written that i was totally in love with this Sharon from the very start. And then to end with cute antics of SwaRon was really amazing. Nothing could have been better then those cute SwaRon moments that you wrote so nicely in the end.

So to sum up it was just brilliant effort and it brought so much happiness to all of us the SwaRon fans to read such joysconfrontation. Thank you very much for writing this story. And thank so very much for Sharing it with me through PM. I think i really missed reading this best work of yours. All the best for all the future works and i hope to see you coming up with something more fun this time around.

Pratik

Pratzyyy thank you sooo very much for such a lovely awesome super duper long comment I feel really elated with the fact that you really liked the Sharon of my Os..😊. I'm glad that you liked my work and the visuals that were imagined by me could come to you too..😊. You really really made my day with such an awesome comment thank you very much really..🤗

Originally posted by: prateek.007

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<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2" color="#990000">What an amazing played here in part 3..I just loved the multiple description of POV in case of SwaRon individual mind frame..The flow of emotion,the outstanding trail of writng is just awesum..I think i am so late to resuming part 3, but after reading i was like completely surprised..I dont know about others..But i think ur writng is different and u have ability to write so so well..So moving on..The way u narrated swayam and sharon conditions,their confession and sharon's laila wala mode..!!😆is really beautifully potrayed..I am sure we never get to see this in serial..So its good to have some intense feelings from ur write up..The bestest part was sharon proposing swayam and that too in laila mode..Seriosuly u done such a beautifull dialouge delivery here..As usual loved swayam;s expression..Woh toh definitly shock hoga hi aakhir sharon ne pipe chad ke apne pyar ka izhaar kiya hai..lol..😆And loved the ending including all intense moments of swaron..😳So in short..Great work..</font>

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Wow I'm really really happy after getting such lovely comments on my work.. I'm really glad you like my style of thinking and writing and more importantly you liked this Os prateek.. Thank you for the lovely comment..😃.

Dear kashmi di,🤗

Read all the three parts together...n it was a treat!

To do so!!...it was so KHUBHSURAT😳

Now starting frm the start...where Sharon n swayam r sitting side by side...sharon's head on swayam's chest !hayee...❤️

This made me smile at the start only n trust me the smile just widened further on reading!😃

Actually i m happy in a way that i read the ss late...

This s because i could get the joy n fun of reading everything in one go na ! 😛

Omg !then Sharon's plan i tharally enjoyed it!⭐️

Sharon's laila roop was too cool!

Be it chocolates flowers or cleaning swayam's room...but the best was to climb the pipe to reach swayam's room!

Poor girl sachi pyaar hai kya kya karna padhta hai 😆

U knw di aapne jo swayam ke room ka ambience banvaya na Sharon se yoh kuch zada hei romantic tha ! hayee i myself blushed reading it ! 😳 😳

N then the second part !

Loved it even more the confession was so beautifully penned!

Best part was that it was swaronish n i could easily relate to it!

Passoniate swaron ! i cant say anything on this di ! actually i m still in that swaron world! The hugs the kisses all made he feel so happy to read it because aaj kal swaron ke halat toh u knw na :/

The last part sharon's pov was just a cherry on the top!

Actually thank u shilpa di to force kashmi di chalo iss bahane hume bhi itna amazing work padhne ko mila !

I just loved it!

All the things were so prefect di be it ur writing skill or ur imagination or the pace of the story all were awesomely right !!!

Thank u di for such a marvellous peice of writing 👏

Love,

Namu !

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