Swaron Os- Back to us again updated part 3 on page 9 - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: nidhi1998

lovely os

sharon missig swayam and
swayam's possesiveness of the gifts
waiting to read more
thanks for the pm
loved the way you wrote
abt her dream
waiting to read the next part
nidhi

Thanks nidhi for commenting..😃. I'm glad you liked it..😊.
Will surely update soon and will pm you when I update..😊.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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the gift sequencing was really well described with Swayam's possessiveness :)

I wondered why it had to be in parts.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -shenz-

the gift sequencing was really well described with Swayam's possessiveness :)




I wondered why it had to be in parts.

It was in parts coz it'll become a taxing job for you guys as readers to take in such long updates and also I felt giving one super super long update isn't cool so I opted for giving two parts so things are shown in a systematic and presentable manner..😊. Hope you understand now why it was in two parts I gotta take care of the health of my readers can't give them heavy duty stuff all in a day..😊 😛.
Thank you for liking my write up and commenting shenz I'm glad you liked it..🤗.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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you see we can take in much more than what you assume.. so keep that part ready.. !!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -shenz-




you see we can take in much more than what you assume.. so keep that part ready.. !!

As a matter of fact its already written with me ready hai just a lil bit of fine tuning here and there and its ready to be posted..😊.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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WOW!!kashmi that was a WONDERFUL OS...loved it to the core😃you got an amazing talent..hats off..👏👏thanks for the PMp.s PM me when u update..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Simply awsum ❤️
Update asap!! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Arreeey!! Cliff hanger hua abh!! 😡
Aur kya hua?? She turned and??????????
Next part aaj hi update kar na? Please please...itni achi story hai...aur cliff hanger? Not done. Not done at all🤢
Btw it was swaronlicious and swaronish. Swayam was so cute I could see all of this happening...tanu's expression vrushi's antics sab kuch dikha raha hai...it was amazing👏
Continue asap and do write more :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: nkss


WOW!!

</div>kashmi that was a WONDERFUL OS...loved it to the core😃you got an amazing talent..hats off..👏👏thanks for the PM<div>
p.s PM me when u update..😊

Hey thank you so much for your words of appreciation nishi I'm glad you liked my work will surely update soon and pm you when I do update..😃.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sneha_sharon

Simply awsum ❤️
Update asap!! :)

Will surely update soon thank you for the comment dear..😊.

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