Intoxication #1. Part 5 on pg 126/ Link to new thread and teaser pg1.

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IPK007

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Thank you so much for your wonderful response to this story, it made me really happy and relieved as well :) Thanks for all your comments, loved reading each one of them. And yes, I have realized I can never ever write a TS..😕😆

Teaser for Chapter 3:

Leaning against the rusted railing of the small balcony, Arnav stared at the small 4x4, black and white picture held in his hand. As the strong, chilly wind ruffled his hair, the golden glow of dusk illuminated Khushi's face.

Arnav's face was impassive and his gray eyes lazily contemptuous..

Coming on Saturday,

Love you all,

Jenny :)

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leena

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Posted: 11 years ago

#362

HEY DEVI MAYYIIAAA... contemptuous. 😲 😲 Whyyy.

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aashi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#363

hey jenny sorry for late reply , just read ur upd once again simply superb upd 👏👏👏 this story is surely very interesting , story has some mystery hope with passing upd it will unfold , i m curious to know what will happen next, khushi is mentioning someone but who ? arnav is mystery surely n i wonder what is connection with serial killer do upd soon

hmm teaser is interesting do upd soon

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Arjuhisis

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Posted: 11 years ago

#364

aha intriguing teaser

will wait for Saturday's update jenny

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Kishmish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#365

The whole story is a mystery 😲 waiting to read more ...

Thanks for the teaser ...

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golpokobita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#366

thrilling teaser..

looking forward to the update

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-MIMOSA-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#367

Hey Jen dear...sorry for commenting late...

It was written wonderfully...had all the elements of mystery, thrill, intrigue, suspense...enough to make this story perfect...if this were a book then I would have never stopped reading till I reach last page...👏...

And what the!!!...the teaser...what was that...if your first teaser was able to give me goosebumps then this one surely gave me a tachycardia...

Way to go Jen...U excel in every genre which u write...are u a pro writer undercover...😲

See how your mystery thriller has turned my mind to think like a spy(undercover ofcourse...😆)...