Intoxication #1. Part 5 on pg 126/ Link to new thread and teaser pg1.

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Amira

@amira039.303

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Posted: 11 years ago

#371

Oh yay!!! So there will be more updates?!!! I'm soo happy! I love your writing and I was really sad that it was going to end so soon, but I'm glad this story will be longer. The teaser is interesting - does he know khushi from before or something? Is that why he came with the rose? Why is he attracted to her? Also, is he that serial killer? I really hope not, but the story of him killing his wife made be think that he might be the serial killer. I might be completely wrong but it's just a thought that came to me. Really engaging story - can't wait for your next update.

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rockingsoni

@rockingsoni

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Posted: 11 years ago

#372

Is arnav da serial killer!!!

I strongly doubt arnav's intentions towards khushi..

Hope m wrong..

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deepa

@deeswarna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#373

im loving the story with all the mystery and passion:))

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J P

@TwilightStar_JP

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#374

Bhayama irruku! Im scared!

Eagerly awaiting saturday!

Diwali bonus! :)

Cheers

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#375

These days nobody tells me anything!😭

Didn't know you had posted this teaser.

Found it by chance.

And I want this to be converted into a FF, bas.

Only this will pacify me.

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sincereme

@sincereme

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#376

OMG... I m scared now...

Update soon...

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songcouple

@songcouple

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Posted: 11 years ago

#377

😊 so how many chappies does this have

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opsyellow

@opsyellow

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#378

yet to read the second part. I will read all the par together then😆

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pakpearl

@pakpearl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#379

Originally posted by: mimosa658
Hey Jen dear...sorry for commenting late...
It was written wonderfully...had all the elements of mystery, thrill, intrigue, suspense...enough to make this story perfect...if this were a book then I would have never stopped reading till I reach last page...👏...

And what the!!!...the teaser...what was that...if your first teaser was able to give me goosebumps then this one surely gave me a tachycardia...

Way to go Jen...U excel in every genre which u write...are u a pro writer undercover...😲
See how your mystery thriller has turned my mind to think like a spy(undercover ofcourse...😆)...

Wow...beautiful comments 👏👏👏

@ Jenny...I m waiting...