Intoxication #1. Part 5 on pg 126/ Link to new thread and teaser pg1.

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arshisiree

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Posted: 11 years ago

#351

nice update n shez falling for him but scared tat he will betray her

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clarissajohn

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Posted: 11 years ago

#352

superb superb superb jen

as im busy chinna i mean small comment

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ashw99

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Posted: 11 years ago

#353

Brilliant updates jenny...
This story is different, very intriguing... and i like it... :)
they both are too good yaar, burning chemistry can be feel...
I loved khushi's musing time and again... she said it and she had it, red rose, moonlight and a grey eyed guy to romance... just as she dreamt... the encounter was awesome
she is missing him when he is not there...
he is mysterious...
and mysteries are increasing one by one... mails... stalker... serial killer...
loved it jen, will wait to know more about them...
thanks :D

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mishti_17

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Posted: 11 years ago

#354

Something different... Khushi missing him and then there is instant attraction between them...

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Deepti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#355

Gosh, so many mysteries! It can be true if I say that Arnav might have become a serial killer who kills wh**es after his wife and friend betrayed him but my heart tells me differently... Dil hai ki maanta nahin..:D :D
But I don't know if Arnav's appearance was a coincidence or if he was keeping tabs on Khushi... As I feel that somehow everything is linked up with each other... Arnav trying to catch hold of the serial killer is quite sensible too...

And then all that mystery behind the man who send mail to Khushi everyday...

You have got me intrigued with this.. The attraction, the kiss , the mystery, the EVERYTHING is absolutely wonderful...👏👏

Loved it totally..❤️❤️

Update soon😊😊

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Amanram

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Posted: 11 years ago

#356

very intriguing. there seems to be lots of emotional baggage with both arnav and khushi

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bkamber

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Posted: 11 years ago

#357

Ahhh..loving this take on Khushi and Arnav.
Read both Chapters now.
Very excited for the story to progress.
So, we know about Arnav, but who is the other "him" in her life that she is afraid of?
Looking forward for the next chapter.

Edited by bkamber - 11 years ago

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Chochoo83

@Chochoo83

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Posted: 11 years ago

#358

it is intresting story read both parts together

loved it

thanks for pm

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Pooja agarwal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#359

I m here dii 🤗

Dis is really a diff story of ur frm wat i hve till nw

And it have a awesome cncpt 👍🏼

Arnav have seen many up and dwn in his past and wat the 😲 he killed his own damn wife aftr watchng her slp

And aftr watchng khushi she has bcm his intoxication ❤️

Ohh la la dis story is really diff

Waiting for more di

Cntinuee soon plzz

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sunitikapoor

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Posted: 11 years ago

#360

She walks alone in the middle of the night...it is scary...Radio news was chilling and I am worried about Khushi...I am surprised that she is not afraid of Arnav whereas she knows he killed his own wife...I want to wait till you unfold all the suspense...I want to go with the flow of the story and l loved it...

Edited by sunitikapoor - 11 years ago