Intoxication #1. Part 5 on pg 126/ Link to new thread and teaser pg1.

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yoga123

@yoga123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#341

No words...fallen flat for the concept...please continue...I guess arnav is the serial killer...but looks like he is attracted towards khushi...very intriguing...I have added you as buddy...can you PM me the updates...thanks in advance...

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rukuswasthika

@rukuswasthika

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Posted: 11 years ago

#342

nice story dear.the 2nd part was awesome.khushi has met her prince charming now

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Diya Ganguly

@Careless_Artist

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Posted: 11 years ago

#343

Arnav fallen for Khushi deeply, but Khushi didn't want believe it, as for her he is a serial killer..
She know he is her prince charming, but reality force her to believe it..
I lOVE this mysterious TS..
It is different that's why it is appropriate for IF..
Don't underestimate your work..
Waiting for next part..

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Anamika100

@Anamika100

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Posted: 11 years ago

#344

This is so gritty and the writing style so vivid that I can literally feel like I am watching this on a movie screen.

Khushi is so disillusioned, cynical, realistic and world weary and yet she can not help her attraction to him. He is a mystery ...he really knows how to anticipate her reactions...is that because he really means it or is he really adept at pushing the right buttons to get the reaction he wants?

Put this against the backdrop of the clubs scene, serial killer on the prowl for sex workers and both Arnav and Khushi being very mysterious characters. I am waiting for more...

I think this story is fine for IF...

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vgedin

@vgedin

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Posted: 11 years ago

#345

Unresed here -

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/94740752

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Shruti Gupta

@Shruti21

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#346

hume padhna hai ye.. :)
but after papers *sigh*
i hate ICAI... :|

I will be here on 23rd november.. :)

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 11 years ago

#347

part 2
nice part...
oh thats Arnav...
and Khushi knows about his professional life...
who is that stalker?
is it Arnav or someone else?
Arnav is at her front then who was following her?
cont soon dear...

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BubblySanaya

@BubblySanaya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#348

Even though u wrote a long update... There is still so much left unknown.

But im eager to read it getting revealed at whatever pace you decide...

And this kiss... Ooohhh
And the single red rose.. Wow... Now i wish even my man would give me a single red rose... Its so romantic... 😳