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i didnt enjoy the kiss because during the whole time i was pre-occupied with the chant in mind, "dnt do anything tht u wlll regret khushi, dnt take this fwd" srry :( . but will read it again to enjoy it now tht i knw nuthing happens.

hmm.. attraction so visible.. lets c if she stays..

Hi ... Just came across ths story ... Read all the chapters n one go ... Loving it n lookn forward 2 c how ths story unfolds ... Sry if im nt able 2 comment as reading it on my mobile ... U wrk is very nice ... Keep up the good wrk

tht was the fantastic update...

it was awsumm chapter 😊 like the title of chapter thanks for pm

OMG! The first kiss...

Originally posted by: P4rveen12

Wow that was an amazing and mind blowing update,

I absolutely loved the update, a brilliant read from start to finish.

Honestly reading the kiss in the update was just one of they best birthday present I could get today, lol.

The kiss definitely lived up to my expectation and probably surpassed my expectations.

Loved the part of the house Khushi ended up in, it was described so beautifully and perfect location for there first kiss.

Honestly the kiss was just so beautiful, intimate, sensual, amazing, powerful and passionate.

Love the fact Arnav actually asked Khushi indirectly for her permission.

Awww Arnav asking Khushi to stay, can't wait to see what she does and if she agrees.

Loved, loved, loved the update,

Thanks for the PM,

Continue soon, eagerly waiting for the next part xx

Originally posted by: kclovearshi

Aww. that was a beautiful kiss 😳

The interplay of their emotions leading up to the kiss, the ambience of star lit sky with a soft Moonlight, the sparkling blue waters, soft yellow flowers, truly beuatiful, a prince in blue and a princess in white, made for an enchanting kiss 😉

Love, Love, Loved it 😛

Exceeding our expectations, you scored a ten out of ten, Sandy 😉

Hmm, Khushi is jealous of Lavanya and that showed up when she inadvertantly addressed her as his Girlfriend...did I hear a chuckle..he must have inwardly 😛 An angry, jealous Khushi = a passionate kiss 😉

He is a gentleman in making sure she wanted it as much as him by asking her if she wants to leave and a smart one at that too..!! But shouldn't he have apologized for going too far in the end? Of course he got carried away but a sorry would have amended it?

He wants her to Stay.!! Hmm let's see what Khushi does now 😛

Thank you for listening to your readers 😃

Cheers

K

Wow...That was an Amazing update...
They shared their 1st kiss...:)
Beautifully writtn...
Nd Lav s not his GF...Pheww...
Waitng 4 d nxt part...
Cntinue soon