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That was a top rated first Kiss Sandhya...It was totally a surprise to see your PM in my inbox...I was smiling like I got some good gift from my husband...and he was surprise to see that smile on my face at late night...love you sweety for an early and a wonderful update...the chapter was as beautiful as always...again you leave us in cliffhanger which is not at all bearable...but I know you want to keep the suspense alive like last chapter...I loved Khushi's POV...first thinking about the gift which was given to her by Anjali and then what she has given to Anjali and then about Arnav...that was really penned beautifully, when she was thinking about Lavanya...admit Khushi you are jealous of Lavanya...Oh...I loved it...you always write it beautifully and I love it...after that I loved Arnav POV and I want her ...NOW...absolutely written amazingly...I loved it, when Khushi stopped Arnav to go further...and just adore it when she said go back to your girlfriend and he replied at the same time she is not my girlfriend...I think now they both are starting understanding each other...it is like...Ishaaro Ishaaro mein dil lene waale bataa yeh hunar tune sikhaa kahaa see...nigaaho nigaaho mein jaadoo chalaanaa meri jaan sikhaa ne jahaa se hain tum ...and in the last word STAY...was to stay with them not to leave...how sweet.

Originally posted by: Eternalallure

The moment I see a DND update in my pm inbox my lips stretch into a wide smile, my heart flutters and thrums in anticipation, I rub my hands in glee and feel excitement and nervousness flow through my veins ready to explode. Yes. That is the charm of your writing and it never diminishes.

The update was splendid. Everything- from the ambience to their banter to their inner monologue and flirting, from the considerate permission to the hearty consent and from the first brush of lips to the full-blown all-consuming kiss- was, as you had aptly described, electrifying. Fireworks. Rainbows.

The kiss was fiery. It was sensual. It was passionate. It was romantic. It was gentle. It was soothing. It was loving. It was everything a girl could ask for a first kiss. And then some more.

It was all Arnav and Khushi. And Rabba Vey. And Dhak Dhak.

Amazing job S. 👏

Waiting for more eagerly.😊

OMG, What a mind blowing kiss... awww

Originally posted by: TwilightStar_JP

Sandhyaaa...I feel like calling out loud but I know it wouldn't sound too well so akkkaaa!!!

My my! You articulated the whole scene with excellent choice of words! This was par excellence! Beautiful! Magnificent actually!

A kiss cannot call it a simple kiss even though it was because of the way you depicted it! The penning down was fantastic!!


Be it their thought process! The surroundings that seemed so surreal! The aftermath it was all so good!

It was like walking through a road that's covered with autumn leaves fallen all over and rays of sun peeking through!


Just too good! I have run out of adjectives to describe this update.!


But I guess the push was expected! The kiss just cannot have a nice ending!


But the last part was worth the wait! Stay four letter word conveyed so much more!

Beautiful dammit!


Bliss!


Cheers

Originally posted by: 1chilly

I am back.

Sandy, as Twiggy said before me, this kiss surpassed the Diwali kiss.

It really did.

The whole buildup of tension to the kiss, and then the actual event was beautifully described.

Their acceptance of their mutual attraction was so natural.

And then he sais stay.

Will she stay?

Hope she does!

Sandy, I'm sorry for the short comment, but am dead tired.

But I can safely say this update made me forget for a while I was tired.

Originally posted by: AquaSandhya

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<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Did you just call me akka? Awww...come here sweetheart🤗</font>

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<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">My sister used to call me that when we were kids and we grew up and she stopped.</font>

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<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Thank you for that wonderful lovely sweet comment😊</font>