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wow what a first kiss

I think if Khushi didn't stop him, Arnav wouldn't have stopped

He was so far gone with his desire for her

That first kiss and the lead up to it- it didn't meet expectations - IT EXCEEDED!

Awesome - loved the one word command in the end - Stay!

I can't wait to read more...

Originally posted by: Crazy4Sobti

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0AS74zFdcZI&list=PL104D4E6F7FBEFECC[/YOUTUBE]

Wow lovely update

Did she stayed... Loved it ...

Wow what can I say and where do I start from as I don't want to miss what I want to say let me start with Khushi from Arnav' point looked absolutely beautiful and picture perfect in white, he was enchanted and could't have control himself even if he wanted to and to him it must have felt like that she was calling to him to come and wake her up from a slumber like a sleeping beauty with a kiss from her Prince Charming.

I loved Khushi's monologue when she was questioning herself , telling herself off, asking to think before thinking and involving Devi Mayia too in her jumble up thoughts..she accepted that she was jealous of Lavanya being physically close to Arnav but she did't question why would she be jealous, I think she will soon.

The swimming pool scene with all the nature around Khushi and her reaction to it all was written beautifully and was very visual, I loved it.

Khushi actually asked Arnav to go back to his GF? Does she know how much she revealed by that one sentence to an experienced man like Arnav..she realised too late as the cat was already out of the bag and she could't have taken the words back.

Khushi said she is Bankrupt..as in emotionally bankrupt, all is given and used or was she thinking money wise?

Now THE kiss.. Sandya I am still looking for the appropriate words to give you right compliment on that particular scene.
I have not read more beautiful kiss scene than that and I mean it absolutely and not just saying it. Every action and reaction was captured and the communication verbal and nonverbal, consent to the kiss and to take it further, helpless passion, the expression, inability to stop, the complete involvement to the exclusion of everything else and the crumbling Arnav's resolve to not take things from no return keeping in mind of Khushi's innocence as she is his sisters best friend and if the same age.
Also loved that he did't want khushi to go from him without any words so he tried his best and told her to tidy herself. You need to get a standing ovation for this and the pool scene.

This will be my last comment before I come back.
Thank you for the PM.

this was awesome! loved the place where all the action happenned. Let's see what next now!

OMG!!! I am getting goose bump...I fav song...Awesome...