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What a beautiful beautiful update!!!! And the kiss under the stars was simply amazing. The whole aura around them, the setting was so perfect with wind blowing, pool, lights and laburnum tree and in the middle of it all Khushi standing with her arms opened wide. It's such a beautiful visual and you penned it so perfectly.
Aww.. he followed her, great. I like such people who knows what they want and instead of running away face it head-on.
Khushi couldn't stop herself from asking about Lavanya, could she now? Haaa!!!!
Him tucking her hairs behind ears and she turning her face in his palm reminded me of the first almost kiss during Diwali but I'm glad here it didn't remain as almost and was completed. 😳
The kiss was awesome, simply awesome.
Now the question is would she stay?

Abhi na jaao chod kar ke dil abhi bhara nahin
Abhi abhi to aayi hoo abhi abhi to
Abhi abhi to aayi ho bahar banke chhayi ho
Hawa zara mehak to le, nazar zara behak to le
Ye shaam dhal to le zara
Ye dil samhal to le zara
Main thori der jee too loon nashe ke ghoont pi to loon
Nash ke ghoont pi to loon,
Abhi to kuchh kaha nahin, Abhi to kuchh suna nahin
Abhi na jaao chod kar ke dil abhi bhara nahin...

Sitarein jhil mila uthe...
Chirag jagmaga uthe
Bas ab na mujhko tokna...
Na badhke raah rokna
Agar main ruk gayi abhi to jaa na paungi kabhi
Yehi kahoge tum sada ke dil abhi nahin bhara
Jo khatam ho kisi jagah ye aisa silsila nahin...

This was the perfect culmination to the story so far. I have no idea what will happen next but the kiss, the kiss will be forever etched in my memory as one of the most perfect ever written. The ambience, the emotions and the execution ...all perfect.

Oh.. I can still feel my heartbeats!

What a magical kiss Sandy! How many times I read it, it's just not enough! It's like reliving that Diwali moment again and again albeit with 100% success rate! 😃

Everytime I come across kiss like this in FF, my anxiety increases anticipating some bloody call from somebody(Aman mostly) to spoil the spell! So I was super anxious here as well. But Thanks to you nothing of the sort happened!
and I lurveeed it!

I know Khushi was lost in the moment, but coming from Khushi's background I would expect more doubts about Lavs-Arnav equation. Lavanya was quite easy around Arnav and now that the kiss has happened it may lead to more insecurity on Khushi's part unless it is addressed. I know there is no commitment, just strong chemistry and immense attraction right now but then isn't it enough to make Khushi jealous?

Arnav asks her to stay. Now am curious what happens? Khushi stays and some more fireworks??

Loved the update, Sandy! It was a real treat to read.

Quest- When you described dresses, do you have any bisuals or you just imagine them?? The designer in you is evident when you describe the landscaping, arrangement of interiors, lights etc.

wow

i love the song too much and u incorporating it in the enchanting kiss shared by my most fav couple , Arnav n Khushi surrounded by such a beautiful environment was simply mesmerizing!!!!!

A great story...growing up years first crush first eyelock first kiss...how it takes one back in the memory lane...great characters and great story...but as they say distance makes heart grow fonder ...distance will make both the protagonist realize the true extent of their feelings and secondly growing up does take time and it is the process which Arnav has finished and Khushi is undertaking...Hope Shyam and Anjali have a happy ending and Ana too get some one soon ...ohhh and when are you introducing payal and arranging a meet between them...

Great story.

cheers
Anukriti

First kiss

That was just BEAUTIFUL sandhya...
i am speechless..!! their first kiss... could feel the heat.. each and every word convey the passion... brilliant girl par excellence..!!
again "I want her" was superb then and now ...
loved him to give her option to back out... but she was a surprise to join him with equal fervor... that was the best kiss i have read... :p
after kiss scene was awesome the way he stopped her gave dupatta and ask to visit room... god perfect..!! and his "stay"... will she stay some more for him..?? i really hope so ; )
beautiful start... khushi's frustration was quite evident... yeah, why she has to cling him and he all over her... and her "i am bankrupt"... hehe
loved the updates thanks :D