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U know the only thing i cud say is (in bold ) OH MY GOD !!!
that was one hell of a scene u enfolded. Superb 👏

finally the First Kiss!!!
i love the fact how the understand eachother so easily.. he just said stay, and she knew he meant abt 1 extra day...

yo...yo...yo..
they kissed. ..under the stars..wow..

wow what a kiss...it was magical 😃

Originally posted by: _disha_

Sandhya meri jaan !!! Thank you !!!!❤️

Awww.. Sandhya this is most definitely one of the top rated first kisses i have read here on IF and swear am not saying this for the heck of it at all.

The first part where Khushi left the party for some alone time , and an obvious attempt to calm her heart and feelings down was excellently written.

Your detailing of the ambiance as always was top notch and to top it her internal tug of war with her own self ...loved it.

And then when Arnav comes there .. bas i knew it this would turn out even more amazing than jaadoo hai nashi hai scene.

The best part was you made her trip a bit but not fall , love it how you take only the essence of ipkknd but give it your own Sandhya treatment.

Their initial nok jhok was very spontaneously written the build up to the whole sexual tension just bang on !!

Another Sandhya moment was when Khushi expressed her self to want the kiss equally as a partner in crime when he asked her whether she would like to leave , i love it that she is not some naive little teenager ... she is as confident as one can get in such a situation.

Also how he was mindful initially that this was probably her first kiss was so adorable ..then of course he threw caution to the winds and went all Arnav over her !!☺️

Besharam pehle hi jhatke main dori tak pahunch gaya ...AND I AM SO GLAD SHE STOPPED HIM WHEN SHE DID.

These are all your very own trademark moments for me .. something i expect from you as a person behind the writing.

The kiss was beautifully described ,,, the gazing , caressing , the initial brush of lips ... it was sensual , and of course what followed the next moment .. HOT with a capital H.

All those little movements , where his hands slip down , he pushes her hair away , caressing her back , her gasping , his tongue in her mouth ... aaahhh i think i will get an orgasm just giving my review... i can literally taste that kiss...😳 😆

Then after the kiss when she walks away ,... i was just hoping she should not embarrass herself in anyway and her backing away was again very well written , it was more to stay in control of herself than running away like a embarrassed girl again i loved that.

She was not ashamed ... Arnav also looked our for her in his own distinctive way by asking her to check on her appearance before venturing out.

And of course he actually asked her to stay ... i wonder what she will answer but he actually asked her to stay .. that was adorable.

stalking you pays off... as usual enjoyed the ride in the world you create... by God I can simply live only for this!!

omg... this was a rocking update... ahem ahem...it was so sensual ... too good... both understand each others so well... ankhon hi ankhon me ishara ho gaya :D

Comment updated on page 17

fabulous update.loved der first kiss.
the way he told her not to go lovely😳