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Originally posted by: meera30

Now THIS is timing! ;)

I am so sorry this is going to be a short comment S. My parents place has patchy internet and typing on the phone is painful. But I am going to try!!

What a kiss - under the stars with water and light and flowers and a laburnum tree - a girl who glows from within and put and a boy so besotted and yet so in control. This is what first kisses should be about. Beauty and elegance and romance, a little envy and some banter, some masterful flirting and just as spunky retorts, of lips and tongues and fire and wind and everything that goes dhak dhak and more, of knees that give way, of feelings that run wild, of a little fear and even more excitement, of leaving and staying, of requests and pleas and orders the heart can't deny.

Khushi was enchanted by her surroundings, Arnav by her and we were spellbound by your words.

Magical. Yes. And then some.

Beautiful beautiful first kiss. Of innocence and playfulness perfectly balanced with passion and desire. Simply outstanding!

Originally posted by: vgedin

You are early !

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O Sandhya!

This was better than the Diwali almost-kiss scene. There. I said it!

There was passion, but both were equals. He asked for her consent and she gave it willingly. Both of them aware of what was happening, in spite of being consumed with desire. She stopped him when she thought it was going too far, and he stopped. And most importantly - they didn't allow that to create an awkwardness or a chasm between them. They acknowledged what happened, and also where they must draw a line. I just wanted to jump up from my seat here and applaud you. Bas!

And the kiss... ☺️ Jealousy, fireworks, nok-jhok... and then a kiss under the stars. PERFECT! Totally sucked into the vortex of all the ArHilicious passion 😳

As passionate as sexy as it was, I love how they were so wonderfully true to their character the whole time... Khushi's consent to the kiss, her disapproval at him taking things too far (SO proud of her!) Arnav kissing her like she was his salvation, but stopping when he felt her discomfort. But rather than being ASR-ish nasty with her, he was respectful and honest - accepting even. He voiced his yearning - "Stay" he said it. Lovely!

Oh, will she stay ? Or has the time for judaai come? Wait, please tell me this scene isn't over yet !

Originally posted by: 1chilly

I am not going to speak to you now. I was at work and you updated. I am now sitting at the doctor's with I. And what am I doing waiting for you scrap. And what do I see an update.

That was a wonderful first kiss... perfect. Nicely written.