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anjubua

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Posted: 11 years ago

#141

nicely written dear the kiss scene was

portray nicely and Arnav

considering her feeling

and not taking things further

when she said no.

continue soon👏

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Arnima

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Posted: 11 years ago

#142

The moment I see a DND update in my pm inbox my lips stretch into a wide smile, my heart flutters and thrums in anticipation, I rub my hands in glee and feel excitement and nervousness flow through my veins ready to explode. Yes. That is the charm of your writing and it never diminishes.

The update was splendid. Everything- from the ambience to their banter to their inner monologue and flirting, from the considerate permission to the hearty consent and from the first brush of lips to the full-blown all-consuming kiss- was, as you had aptly described, electrifying. Fireworks. Rainbows.

The kiss was fiery. It was sensual. It was passionate. It was romantic. It was gentle. It was soothing. It was loving. It was everything a girl could ask for a first kiss. And then some more.

It was all Arnav and Khushi. And Rabba Vey. And Dhak Dhak.

Amazing job S. 👏

Waiting for more eagerly.😊

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vgedin

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Posted: 11 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: AquaSandhya

Twiggy darling, You actually said it. 🤗

OMG...do you want me to sleep or stay awake fanning my jet lag with this adrenaline rush? 😆

Thank you😳

🤗

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afshanbabar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#144

Just loved it. I felt like i was there watching them, experiencing it with them. It was jadoo and i can feel the nasha.

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1chilly

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Posted: 11 years ago

#145

You knew I was at work. Now Iwill boude andboude and not comment.😭😡😭

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swapna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#146

awesome awesome part. I wish kushi stays too

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AquaSandhya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: 1chilly
You knew I was at work. Now Iwill boude andboude and not comment.😭😡😭

Awww...🤗

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pearl.b

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Posted: 11 years ago

#148

Awesome..Brilliant..u weave magic dear with ur beautiful words.Thanks.

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Anjali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#149

sandhya amazing first kiss u described ...brought me back memories of mine

so so beautiful

i am feeling so nice

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vgedin

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Posted: 11 years ago

#150

Originally posted by: 1chilly
I am not going to speak to you now. I was at work and you updated. I am now sitting at the doctor's with I. And what am I doing waiting for you scrap. And what do I see an update.

Charu Sandhya did dhokhebaazi with me too She resed over an hour earlier than she said she would. I wasn't even around to stalk! It was a stroke of luck that I made it on Pg 1 ..

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