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AquaSandhya

@AquaSandhya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#111

Updated on page 17 😊

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Nidsubh007

@Nidsubh007

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Posted: 11 years ago

#112

Nids

WOOHOO!!!!

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Wonderful update Sandy. I think I've expressed my thoughts on this update a few times already. 😆

That first magical kiss is something that is treasured by most women & the way you wrote this moment between Khushi & Arnav is definitely something to remember!!!!

You created magic that was felt by each and ever reader on this thread, that again goes to your ability with words.

Hands down a great first kiss for Khushi Kumari Gupta.

Will she stay? Of course she will.

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IDatIF

@IDatIF

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Posted: 11 years ago

#113

How you presented the whole chapter it was beautiful and amazing

Khushi shy, innocent but arnav opposite
Will wait to find out what does stay means

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kushiarnav1

@kushiarnav1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#114

lovely update...

liked the way u written kushis' pov,poor girl confused about her feeling regarding arnav,she is very young to understand ,and the attraction and pull towards him ,not controlling her mind...i loved it the way she thinks about anjali and her gift...

so arnav also feeling the same...now they kissed each other,will kushi regret???? and arnav asked her to stay,now what she will do????? ...

l loved it, kushi told arnav go back to u r girlfriend and raizada also replied the same way she is not my girlfriend😃😃😃😃😃😃😃...

thank u for the update and pm...

cheers...

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khareshelley

@khareshelley

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Posted: 11 years ago

#115

wow what a kiss...!!!!!
Beautifully described..!!!!! it was magical..!!!!!!
arnav want her to stay...!!!!!!!!!
pls continue soon..!!!!

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karsvinu

@karsvinu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#116

Wonderful one!😊...kiss was wonderful but y i'm i so tensed about this situation..😕...what now???.

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opsyellow

@opsyellow

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Posted: 11 years ago

#117

when I saw the title I understood that something is going to happen.

Beautiful chapter.

He asked her to stay😃

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-DobByDoDgeR-

@-DobByDoDgeR-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#118

Obviously loved the kiss as the whole chapter was literally dedicated to it
Loved it
Hope the next chapter comes soon

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#119

😃

WOW ... ❤️ ❤️

That was some magic you created Sandhya ...

A starry night by the poolside ... the laburnum tree with its flowers strewn all around creating a yellow carpet on the ground ... a soft breeze blowing ... Khushi looking ethereal ... a nymph ... like a dream in white ... love in the air ... all playing havoc with the senses ... enough to make even the sanest of people loose their senses ... then what was Arnav ... already so madly attracted to Khushi ... 😉

The kiss was the culmination of all their feelings which had been sizzling below the surface since they had set their eyes on each other ... it was the most passionate ... erotic and sensual first kiss ... they both succumbed to their feelings so naturally ...

but when he wanted to take things to the next level she moved away ...

just loved the way you made them both handle their passion ... in such a mature manner ... not as though they have done something that is wrong ...

Just loved it when he asks her to ... "Stay" ... will she ... wont she ???

(I thinks that she will stay-the potency of passion is too strong 😳 )

Thanks Sandhya ... just love the way you have written this chapter and all the others too ...

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hmm.. guess karo :P

@jas0308

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Posted: 11 years ago

#120

that was beautiful update sandhya.. really really beautiful

so beautifully described everything...

very well written as always

omg.. they kissed.. kiss which was so sensual, so passionate.. now I think it's high time one of them realize their feelings completely... they know they are attracted towards each other and how much they try something always get them together!!!!

hope she will stay for some more time

continue soon

thanks for the pm

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