ARHI SS 'LOVE AGAIN' PART-4 Page 26, 25/10 - Page 4

Originally posted by: sondaryalakshmi

Really really nice n interesting.

So after how many years is Arnav seeing Khushi??

Thanks for reading my story and comment.

Arnav is seeing this person after 2 years.

Originally posted by: tinsel

A Beautiful surprise.

Thank You 😃

Originally posted by: EMERALD-S

Fantastic concept.wonderfully written.

Thank You so much and I am happy that you liked the concept.😃

Originally posted by: Anony_mous

First of all, let me congratulate you on your first writing endeavor :)

Coming to the story, I am glad that you skipped the messy parts of the show and branched out to something different altogether. No contract marriage and no sleeping by the poolside and no talking to the goat and no being the punching bag for everyone for poor Khushi here. I am guessing Khushi will be a strong character here, right?

Does that mean that Shyam situation is still unresolved? Or there is no Shyam in this story? Payal-Akash story, is it a part of this plot?

The feel and flow of the chapter is awesome. The basic story line is very strong. And you are treating it with utmost finnese. I am sure you will mold this piece into a great read for all us Arshi readers out there.

Waiting for the story to unfold :)

Anony,

You have no idea how elated I am to read your comment. You are one of the writers from whom I draw inspiration and trust me each and every word you said is so motivating.

With this story I am trying to deal with different kind of mess, the mess in Arnav's heart. Whoever is going to clean the mess will be strong character.

The focus here is Arnav only, other characters will be referenced on a need basis.

Thanks again Anony, for encouragement and I really hope I live up to the expectations set with first chapter.

PS: Between commenting on MKM II and replying to your comment on my story, I didn't know which one to choose first because both made me nervous. But then I decided to reply here because I need to wrap my head around what Arnav's thinking in MKM.

Originally posted by: soaringskies

beautiful beginning👏

Thank you for taking time to read my story.😃

Originally posted by: RizArshi

It was beautifully written. Loved it :)

Thank you for reading it. 😃

Originally posted by: yappingduck

simply fabulous
loved itc

Thank you for reading it 😃

Originally posted by: opsyellow

Very beautiful

Thank You 😃

Originally posted by: TaujooMadiha

loved it

Thank You 😃

Originally posted by: koisk

Awesome, loved it...

Thank You😃