Liquorice Burning#3 [ArHi] Part 29 Updated 091316 - Page 7

When are you updating next...

So when is that scroll down update coming ??

congo on the new thread

I came to your story through a referral. I just read it all in one go as it is very interesting. Love Akash, Payal, Anjali and Dadi in this one. Somehow this seems more real than what the show was about. Akash, Anjali and Payal definitely have spines in this story as who can go on living happily knowing it came at the cost of someone else's suffering? Love these 3 characters. Love this Kushi for rising over the misery that was her life but mostly for reacting the way a normal person would with rage and hurt not the Ever suffering Meena Kumari in the show. Dadi's story surprised me a little but it make sense that she was in the ashram because of what happened. Like her remorse on leaving her grandchildren. I like that this Arnav realized his faults but is not necessarily changing into a meek doormat for redemption. He does realize he has to ask for forgiveness before deserving her again but he knows what his aim is. He is not giving up without a fight. I feel terrible for Payash to be missing out on the joys of their first pregnancy. This is definitely going on my stalking list . . .

hope u r fine dear...

Came across ur story and read it in one go... Just couldn't stop... Fantastic story... Superbly written... Loving all the characters...

Loving the balance between emotions, intensity, pain and remorse...

I am most glad that both Anjali and Akaash helped khushi, without Arnav's knowledge and did not leave her alone to face the real world yet they did not emotionally blackmail her into coming back even though their own personal lives r messed up...

I just have one request... Plz donot let Khushi forgive Arnav so easily... Also let Arnav repent and woo back Khushi without any manipulations...let him win her back genuinely...

Update soon

waiting for an update aria

When do we get an update here??