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Posted: 12 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: Aishaqaiser

Thks 4d update!!!! Loved it!!!!! Superbly drafted...loved d convo btw deeya n arnav...difference in ideologies bt love,care n concern 4 same person...loved d action later...arnav taking initial steps towards mending their relationship...which s gonna b hard...bcz khushi s not same anymore...both fighting with their past...innermost fear..turmoils...make arnav work harder to woo khushi back bcz no man shud take his girl granted!!!!


yeah the irony is, despite their differences both of them want exactly the same thing for khushi. thats a good common ground to have...

you want to make arnav work harder?😲i thought we were all being too sadistic already😆

Thanks Aisha, glad you liked the update :)

Originally posted by: archmink

Wow ... that was a surprise
Hard to believe that he kept his part of the deal
Khushi expected him to stand up for her that night ... but mr.raizada learns things the hard way ...
Knowing his reputation it was ok for her to think that someone might walk out of that bedroom ..


why is it so hard to accept? remember, that's the one thing he hates/despises the most about his father.

lol. yeah, khushi was being typically khushi...there😆

Thanks!
Edited by -Aria- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: sreeanshu

Getting very interesting.Nice update


Thank you!


Originally posted by: yoga123

Awesome parts...thanks for the PM


Thank you!


Originally posted by: .Boss.

Amazing update! Trust is slowly building! Keep updating!


Thank you!


Originally posted by: koisk

That was too emotional and it was a wonderful update👏


Thank you!


Originally posted by: Kalyaani

All I can say it this - Arnav you have miles to go before you sleep...


Thank you!
Edited by -Aria- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: gifttag

That telephone was bothering Arnav to no end and while in the middle of business talks he was still thinking of Khushi's pale face..how closely he must have been watching her to note ever so slight change in her expressions...he is a keen observer where Khushi is concerned.

since he has found her, she has become the most important deal of his life, ever😆 so don't be surprised that he is noting all those small things.

He then get only source of information 'Diya' to tell him what is going on and Diya being Diya did't open up to him as he wanted her to but thinking about Khushi and her welfare she dropped a hint as to all was not well and if he could keep an eye on her when she goes to meet that slimy Manager...this girl is so cute and funny I loved her responses to Arnav and he has finally met a girl who would't give him straight answers and is imuned to his charms..Arnav knew that this girl really cares for Khushi.

both want the same thing so at least there is a common ground.

In a very ASR style he sorts the Manager out by speaking the same language he understands and by aggression that only a man would understand and let the cat out of bag and Khushi can't rest until she had her answers but she got none. I am so glad that he went and sorted that B*****d out once and for all..how did Khushi think that she could deal with such character in her own.

only khushi knows😆

He takes her to his apartment and poor Khushi is so very apprehensive and unsure... the last place she wants to be...in close proximity of Arnav... ' I have kept my side of the deal' by just saying this line he has answered lots and lots of questions that Khushi had at the time and she could see his honesty in his eyes which speaks volume to her much more than his words which were not many in past but he out to change all that, so he explains to her in words too that there have been no other woman in his life since she left despite of what press has been writing..that was beautiful scene..very subtle and quiet.

absolutely. she is where she least wants to be, or at least she thinks so anyway. and he wont make it any easier for her to walk away this time.

That was a fabulous update and I loved it a lot for obvious reason and that is to see ASR in 'action'.
Please continue soon.
Thanks for the PM.

Just to let you know that I am travelling from mid Oct to Mid Nov, so won't be able to comment in that period. Pls don't remove me from your PM list.

Thank you. Glad you liked the update. I don't have a PM list, as you know, but will try and keep you updated :)

Edited by -Aria- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: -Aria-


Did you even read the last two update?😛 or did I miss your comment?😃😆


Oh dear

All this while I assumed I have left my comment, I just realised I haven't! Before EOD tmrw. Pakka promise 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aria, hope you are doing well. Please take care of yourself. 🤗
And now, congratulations for the new thread. 🥳

Now you have to come back soon to action.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56


You tease!! Where is the update?? Pl update sooon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
What a fantastic story. Read all the parts in one go.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
For Chapters 20 and 21:
Firstly, sorry about being so late. Somehow I was under the impression that I had left my comment..

Anyway, about Chapter 20, I was coming this close to asking Deeya to back off, but I was pleasantly surprised with her decision. Standing up for Khushi would be one things, but making decisions for her.. and potentially life altering ones at that.. thats a whole different ballgame altogether. But I loved the way Deeya handled it, she showed Arnav his place but never overstepped the line. Her parting shot stole the show, of course.

Arnav has many things to learn, but I see he has made tremendous progress in one department - patience. The earlier ASR would have lashed out at Deeya long back, given up on Khushi on not receiving the response he desired.. but this one.. he has changed. He is a man on a mission to bring his wife back, and he has made one major achievement - keeping his pride and ego away from all this. Now, there is at least a possibility that he wins Khushi back.

Oh, and I LOVED Arnav's knight in shining armour act! Yeh aaya hero! I wanted to whistle, really! Also, which "night" was Khushi referring to? The night he made her marry him? (This may be a silly question, sorry)

That bit in the end - I guess this is the first time Khushi may be able to let herself believe the sincerity of his intentions. That he has also given importance to vows and stood by them. This was important... baby steps, I like :) This is a good start for them. Or is it?

Loved the double updates 😃

PS - If you respond to this comment, please scrap me the link ? If you have time, that is 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Fantabulous story.Got the link from shruti21 recommendation of stories post.glad I did just amazing piece of work.Read all in one go.good job.Keep it up.After this will wait for your future updates regularly.thanks.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
Hey I just started reading your writings precisely this one
So can you please PM me for future updates?

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