Liquorice Burning#3 [ArHi] Part 29 Updated 091316 - Page 9

Originally posted by: IronButterfly

It was a very wise decision to meet Deeya as she is his way forward to Khushi.

I always look forward to Arnav's banter with her as it's always interesting to see two strong personalities clashing.

But Khushi is their common ground so they do manage to make some progress.

Liking how is entire focus is on Khushi. No wonder he is a successful businessman. Knows how to crack a tough deal.

His wedding ring and calling her Mrs.Raizada surely means that they are still married.

I think Khushi will take it badly when she finds out but maybe a tiny bit of her is happy with this news?

It was nice to see him defending her and coming to her rescue but Khushi is right, he wasn't there when she really needed him.

Yep. Khushi is common ground and they hv no choice but to work together. This ff will focus on AK after this point, everyone else will slowly fade out into the background...

Yes they are still married. if only she had caught on, well may be soon ;)

He wasnt there when she needed him but he is trying to be there now...Khushi will have to make a choice soon, live in that past or move ahead...and may be even towards a better - happier future.

Thanks IB :)

Originally posted by: msmarple

"I expected you to do this that night"

Loved it!

Thanks for picking out this line, its one of my favorites too😆 i dont know , if im allowed to say so.😆

Originally posted by: shana123

What a story with emotions just what we
Wanted in the show. So dissapointed there.
Superb, keep going.

Originally posted by: Dimz13

Arnav is really in it for the long haul. His every action shows it. Kushi is more discerning so she can read his eyes. I wish Arnav was as perceptive as well and was able to understand the unsaid words Kushi had "that" night.

I'm glad Deeya inspite of her reservation did give Arnav a vital piece of information about Kushi's meeting with the dumb ass manager. He does not know what he is in store for does he😆

I want to see his face when the full force of ASR hits him. So now they have a long night to make some talk...will they talk or will it be long stretches of silences...and knowing glances...?

Kushi used to be forthright before now it's a fine art...she has the right words and uses them for the right effect no fumbling or hurting easily...you go girl.

Originally posted by: shona136

wow... that was great... very much expected of arnav... going and seething in anger seeing that ass misbehaving with his khushi... i was dancing in joy when arnav punched the hell out of him after he bad mouthed khushi...

but i am even delighted to see that khushi agreed to come with arnav to his apartment... good decision... i know she went through hell in the past, but this is what we were all waiting for to happen... the little tension, excitement, heat between these two... all of these coming back again... i am absolutely adoring this arnav... though he was the one to make khushi go through hell, he now knows he was wrong and wants to repent for his misdeeds, to try and make it right again... and as they, half of your wrongdoing is forgiven when you realise and repent for yur mistakes...

waiting for the next one...!!! absolutely brilliant...!!!!

cheers

Originally posted by: Kavyazz

What a fantastic story. Read all the parts in one go.

Originally posted by: vgedin

For Chapters 20 and 21:

Firstly, sorry about being so late. Somehow I was under the impression that I had left my comment..

Anyway, about Chapter 20, I was coming this close to asking Deeya to back off, but I was pleasantly surprised with her decision. Standing up for Khushi would be one things, but making decisions for her.. and potentially life altering ones at that.. thats a whole different ballgame altogether. But I loved the way Deeya handled it, she showed Arnav his place but never overstepped the line. Her parting shot stole the show, of course.

Arnav has many things to learn, but I see he has made tremendous progress in one department - patience. The earlier ASR would have lashed out at Deeya long back, given up on Khushi on not receiving the response he desired.. but this one.. he has changed. He is a man on a mission to bring his wife back, and he has made one major achievement - keeping his pride and ego away from all this. Now, there is at least a possibility that he wins Khushi back.

Oh, and I LOVED Arnav's knight in shining armour act! Yeh aaya hero! I wanted to whistle, really! Also, which "night" was Khushi referring to? The night he made her marry him? (This may be a silly question, sorry)

That bit in the end - I guess this is the first time Khushi may be able to let herself believe the sincerity of his intentions. That he has also given importance to vows and stood by them. This was important... baby steps, I like :) This is a good start for them. Or is it?

Loved the double updates 😃

PS - If you respond to this comment, please scrap me the link ? If you have time, that is 😊