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Posted: 12 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: scarlet2012

How Khushi was planning to handle the manager, good that Arnav accompanied her. Deeya is really a good friend, and she cares for Khushi, it is natural to be apprehensive about Arnav bcoz of the past actions. Arnav knew he was wrong, but he was finding solace in denial, finally seeing Khushi made him come out of it, and accept to himself that he has terribly wronged Khushi. It is good that Arnav told Khushi about his equation with Lavanya & Natasha, but why should Khushi believe him, once he refused to believe her and accused her to be characterless woman. Arnav is taking it slow, hope he will be able to gain her trust and forgiveness with his actions.

Khushi was being Khushi, she does not really think things through. her impulsiveness has got her into trouble in the past and continues to hound her. i guess somethings never change!

I agree, why should she believe him. But then again, reconciliation, if it has to happen has to start from somewhere and someone will hv to be the bigger person and forgive.


Originally posted by: Aanoo

Beautiful-------ur words hav an automatic way to get inside a person...shaking him to his core. ..
I m always speechless. ..
P.S even I want to know why Khushi chose Italian :p
P.S.S deeya is the ultimate show stoppee alright

Aww Thank you for saying that...

at your ps. arnav is curious, dont worry, it will come up soon ;)

i love deeya too need to balance all the annoyance directed towards her 😆



Originally posted by: Javeria3991

Superb superb update

Khushi is still furious on arnav but now she is thinking about arnav and his action which are trying hard to melt her and urging her to think to give him second chance.
Update soon

Thanks J. sooner or later, he will get to her ;) its only a matter of time


R!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: manikka

for part 20...



for humans...its hard to accept the mistakes...and if the human is with ego...thn the chances to accepts the errors are near NO...but the thing is...frm the point human accept his mistakes...its the starting point of penance for him...

absolutely.

arnav...did many mistakes...and he regret everything...but now seeing khushi, no more like khushi, away frm her family, no more colourful and happy...all this has increased his guilt many folds...

it sure has. he always felt guilty somewhere but all the drastic changes in Khushi just make things that much more obvious to him.

deeya...she is giving ASR a tough time...but the thing is...she is a good person by heart...soo later or sooner she will see weather this person is changed and ready to make amendments in her friend's life or not...khushi's happiness means her a lot...

both want the same thing now...khushi's happiness.

meeting friend's EX behind their back...😆😆...(its the most common thing in collage life...)...and the little words deeya and arnav exchanged...arnav knows better tht she is nothing but a true friend of khushi...and reaching khushi is right now seems impossible for him...so it was a nice step he has taken...

😆 lol

awesome part dear...
thnks for the PM...


Originally posted by: manikka

for part 21...


so arnavji back in ASR mode...hitting and beating tht good for nothing manager...telling him things about khushi being mrs. raizada...

well if only, mrs. raizada took him seriously. he wasnt bluffing!!

and tht s the interesting thing tht the reporters will find the news out about him nad start their search operation about him...and its best for khushi to be with him in his apartment...???..tht won't make any news...

well...it may or it may not. it has both benefits and drawbacks, depends which side you are on!😉

poor khushi...she assumed tht the girl frm gossips will be in arnav's bedroom...😆😆...
nice part...
thnks for the Pm...

lol yeah😆 and she thinks, "nothing matters"😆

Thanks Manikka :)


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Posted: 12 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: farheen75

Thank u, thank u, thank u for giving us 2 amazing updates, now coming to the updates, oh I could write so much abt them and hopefully it will all make sense so here we go, I hope u r not gonna get mad or bored with my comment

Trust me, i never get bored of comments 😃 what do i get out of writing this? the comments bring a big smile to my face. so please, do ramble. critique or spam.

Deeya: I just love her, she is such an amazing friend to Khushi and the only person whose existence that Khushi can count as a blessing in her life... She is caring, straight forward and most of all rational, the way he behaved with Arnav was just awesome and though she strongly dislikes him edging really close to hating him for everything he has done to Khushi but still used her brain to tell him abt the meeting with the manager so that Khushi won't be alone but at the sane time didn't get impressed by his show of concern either, I believe that she will play a huge part in bringing Arnav and Khushi together... Arnav can't thank her enough for being such a support for Khushi.

Deeya is everything Payal was not or could not be to Khushi even though she was fiercely possessive of Khushi, she couldn't take on her inlaws...and fight the circumstance. at times Deeya will seem obnoxious as she already does appear to some of my readers, but in her heart she means well. she has already started to play that role ;)

Khushi: " I don't get hurt easily anymore", this line just said it all and showed Arnav the extent of damage he has done or the crime he has committed to "save" his Di, by attempting to save one life he just utterly ruined another life by forcing to live a life of loneliness and isolation which considering Khushi's personality was the biggest punishment ever for her, by robbing her of her relations which meant the whole world to her, he completely broke her and to top it all she was,is and will forever be In love with him doesn't make life any easier for her... Its as if she is trying relentlessly to try to move on in life but isn't successful is another punishment for her, the helplessness that she feels in failing to moving on is just compounding on her already battered heart and she doesn't get any relief now or by the looks of things in the near future as well, will she ever get this relief is a question only answered by time.

Khushi is trying to put up a brave front but we know when it comes to arnav she can lose it pretty quickly. hence she feels the greater need of that wall. i agree, it doesnt seem fair but may be behind all this gloom something beautiful is waiting for her. hope.

Arnav: will he ever live peacefully knowing the extent of damage he has done to the person he loves so dearly? Khushi's whole change of personality will never ever let him forget the atrocity that he has committed against her,the idea of how she was forced to live alone by his thoughtless action will never let him live completely happy with khushi, even after earning her forgiveness he won't be able to erase the memories of the past 3 lonely years where she desperately tried to hold onto her sanity and worked hard at the same time to make something of her life... Its good to see him trying desperately hard and with single minded attention towards gaining Khushi's forgiveness but he shouldn't hide the fact from Khushi that they r still married,hasn't he learnt from their past history that hiding things from each other can lead to disastrous consequences, she is not the same Khushi anymore who give him benefit of the doubt very easily and at this point of time he shouldn't rub her up wrongly and should be honest and straight forward with her abt everything so that she knows that he is there forever and won't budge unless and until he earns her forgiveness and gets another chance to make a future together based on trust and honesty and of course an unlimited supply of TLC and passionate love from his side.

i dont know know if you can live normally after that realization but if he can get khushi back in his life, or at least make her happy for as long as he can. he will have done his part. whats done is done, at least he can go about fixing whats to come. if you keep thinking about the past, you will never be happy. he knows it now lets see what he does.

Thanks a lot Farheen. Apologies for the delay in replying to your comment. Keep commenting when you can :)


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Posted: 12 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: Samyxx

I love this double update...

And love the Mrs. Raizada part too much...

Awesome chapter...


yeah, don't we all. Thanks Samyxx :)

Originally posted by: arnkhunostalgic

You completely blew me away, for startes I love dee ya, she has spunk...

The best was Khushi's reply to him in the elevTor, how it wud have been if he had really done that that night...

In the end he became her Arnavji...😆


Glad you liked it.

Originally posted by: Neha.AS

hey nice yr but what about khushi...


What about khushi?

Originally posted by: samarablog

oh..the deal..need to read previous chapter..but i think i remember..being loyal one..isnt it..


yeah, thats the one. she had asked him to be faithful if he wanted her to do the same.

Originally posted by: ranogill

At last khushi will stop and listen to him now ... Faithfulness is a must in any relationship... Loved it


she will, not like he will leave her with any other choice as you've probably read by the time i've replied here.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
I'm almost 4 days late in getting here 😲
Haye Devi Maiyya!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: Japonica

Well, that's two people who have had the pleasure of becoming acquainted with Mr. ASR in his role as husband to Mrs. ASR😃 and then discovering how persuasive he can be when it comes to his wife!

Now there just the 'simple and uncomplicated' matter of Mr. and Mrs. ASR getting to admit to each other that they know each other - the real one despite believing otherwise, and now would like to get to know each other even better.

That slap on the creep's face was music to the ears. The crack of the kick on the groin- deeply satisfying!

Great updates,A!

Thanks a lot L. I guess, its mrs. raizada's turn to get acquainted with mr.asr and to be honest, i can't wait to write that part when she realizes that truth.😆 and then there is also the matter of that little confession...oh boy!, there is a lot to write about...if i wish to go that route.😆




Originally posted by: soppy

Im such a sadistic person but i love it when arnav hurts for all his mistakes...maybe its a relapse effect because i didn't get it in ipk...and add to that your amazing way of story telling and you have me hook line and sinker.

Thanks Soppy :)

You are not the only one Soppy, ---sadistic that is. i think we all wanted that...but i've got to get that balance right...in not catering to khushi's ego...or sadism😆 i want to see them happy now. honestly writing this ff, i've started to associtate arnav-khushi with sadness only😆



Originally posted by: vidya.sanjay

Great!

Arnav is really trying very hard to redeem himself.I hope it gets some recognition from Khushi's side.I do not expect her to forgive him so soon , at least she couldtry to fight for her happiness.

Thanks Vidya :)

he is trying. and she will have to let go of some of that grudge and walk a few paces towards him for this to work. does she have it in her to forgive?



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Posted: 12 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: vgedin

I'm almost 4 days late in getting here 😲

Haye Devi Maiyya!


Did you even read the last two update?😛 or did I miss your comment?😃😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: renee.bee

Thnx for d pm

Awesome updts.
Part 20
Arnav met Deeya n got her to help him figure out wht ws botherin khushi.
Well of course apart frm him it ws the manager. glad deeya told him to look after khushi.
Khushi actually went to meet the leech coz of the contract well why did she go.$
She hd thrown Arnav's contract when she worked for him in his face when the guest house incident hppnd even tho Arnav hd only sent there to b away frm her nt with bad intentions.
Moreover she dint hve any financial support n ws in much difficult predicament then n also ASR ws a highly influential man.
Bt here she dint even have haif the confidence to face tht manager leave alone fight him back.
Instead of becoming stronger or wiser she hd become weak thn the old khushi ws so her thinkin tht the old khushi ws innocent n taken advantage of is wrong. she ws let people take advantage of her.
Now the manager knw she's weak thts why he is threatening her.
Glad Arnav reached on time n beat the hell out of the guy. he emphasized the word Mrs raizada for u.
Tht guy still wudnt relent seein a man with khushi n started abusin her n Arnav hit him.
Khushi's words tht she expected him to do this tht night hit Arnav. Arnav clarified seein khushi's expression seein his bedroom tht he kept his end of the deal. meanin he still married to her n does nt hve any relationship with either natasha or lavanya. khushi ws surprised tht 'Arnavji' did keep his end.

why did khushi go? because deep down somethings never change, she can be just as impulsive and reckless at times. i guess, it was different back then, look at what throwing the contract in his face got her? a six month contract marriage..and years in isolation...if you look at it...its not really anything good.

but Arnav is there so fear not😆
yes, he meant it, he has kept his word and been faithful to her. ...

Thanks a lot renee


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Posted: 12 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: sandhya-sp

Aria thanks a lot for two updates...No need to say how much i enjoyed each word...Arnav's restlessness, Deeya & Arnnav convo, then the much expected intervention for that Manager...just awww...I loved the last line, Arnavji has really surprised her...U have stopped the story at a very interesting point which will increase our impatience for the next one...looking forward...


Hope you liked the latest update. more of arnav-khushi there. Thanks a lot Sandhya :)

Originally posted by: ayaman

wow really amazing update...loved it



Thanks a lot Ayaman :)

Originally posted by: sarthshru

aessum 2some update ! loved it to bits dear !

that boody manager !
and khush finally gets to knw bout arnav relationship !!
yuhoo..
i know i m being greedy...but cant help
!!!\
so update sooon !


yes, she has heard but it hasn't registered yet!😉
Hope you liked the latest update :)
Thanks a lot!


Thanks Swetha :)

Originally posted by: meem17

double updtes
loved them
thanks for the pm


Thanks a lot Meem :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: Onlooker

Deeya amuses me..:)

I loved Kushi's unexpected reaction..She expected this from him so many years ago . It literally made Arnav speechless. Now will he reveal his feelings and the truth that he is waiting for her and want her back. And will he accept him without fighting and questioning him..Eager for the next update...hopefully soon..


lol. amuse and not annoy?😆
it was possibly wishful thinking on her part, but she did want it. hope you liked the latest update.
Thanks a lot!


Originally posted by: dreamymaya

hey caught up with the last 3 updates today. Deeya-Arnav conversation was interesting. Deeya grudgingly placed a trust on Arnav... oool! Aha, the manager faceoff with Arnav was excellent...now its time for clearing misunderstandings and confusions! Arnav please dont mess up and Khushi listen patienly before jumping into conclusions...


she did. and may be it was good for khushi.
not like he will give her any other choice but to listen to him..
Thanks Maya :)
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