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asthagarwal thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago

Pooja, kya baat hai??? Shayari n all haan... Luvd ur taza-2 lines... Muahhh...

2 dose who r thnkng tht y am I quoting my comment, dnt waste ur brains here...😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: asthagarwal


Pooja, kya baat hai??? Shayari n all haan... Luvd ur taza-2 lines... Muahhh...

2 dose who r thnkng tht y am I quoting my comment, dnt waste ur brains here...😉

understood..
so its Astha Di n Virus behena
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: asthagarwal

Pooja, kya baat hai??? Shayari n all haan... Luvd ur taza-2 lines... Muahhh...[/DIV]

2 dose who r thnkng tht y am I quoting my comment, dnt waste ur brains here...😉

Thnlu thnku astha dii 😊


Originally posted by: MeenuArshiCrazy

so its Astha Di n Virus behena[/DIV]

Meenu grrr grrr
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Posted: 11 years ago
An an hum kya kahe sab kuch tho tum hair ubdate he keh diya hai ,I loved kushi in the first part a lot ,especially her adamant nature ,served rite for arnav who is always in hurry to run away from emotions ,loved the mil part ,never heard such thing happen before ,that was just lovely and I loved arnavs reaction aftermath ,and coming to KiSS that was superbly written ,especially the way he coverd her ,looking forward with gutter minds full too on ,
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Posted: 11 years ago
Omggg..i am out of words right nowww..
u nailed it diii...
APPLAUDS FOR D UPDATE..
AND AND AND... those edddiittzzz..
OMG..those were too goood...
Loveddd the update A. L.O.T.
Thnks for d pm..
:))
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Barun_Gf

Thnlu thnku astha dii 😊


Meenu grrr grrr


ohh ohh.. cool pooj ji
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing update...feisty khushi was too good...she took the initiative to kiss him..

so happy tht arnav finally got what he deserved...

thx

sri.
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Posted: 11 years ago
woooaaahhh!!!!!!
wow yr it was just outstanding update..
I literally stood up while reading d line wen
they was going to confess...
god!!! You shocked me truely wid d confession
but so happy that they told their feelings to each other!!!
loved it khushi ignored him nd made spicy food for him..
I was laughing hillariously but wen she poured d milk through
d kiss...my mouth was like khushi "O".. I hv read in
previous update that in d nxt part they will kiss but
like dis...ooohh la la la...
finally d kiss stuck him that she also has feelings for him..
the confession was absolutely beautiful...
Arnav poured his heart in front of her...
khushi told him also that she loves him wid heart nd soul..
haayeee kisswa in rainwa..
blush blush***
I had imagined them wid all my guttery minded alert..
loved Arnav how he sheild her from the rain nd kissed
her like no tomorrow...
naughty naughty...
but can understand hw a person felt wen the wait for years
brings so much happiness suddenly...
loved it how they entered in their room in their new world!!
I was thoroughly speechless through out d update
but I hv mentioned all d things which I was hving in my heart
truely loved d update..
waiting for now more romantic nd passionatic updates..
beautifully dome
grt job...
loved it!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
so glad dat they finally confessed to each other.. i feel lighter reading dat😃
...now i know wat ur note meant..seems next update is going to b Hot☺️

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Posted: 11 years ago
Okayy i m cmnting on part 2 also loll
dnt knw wat all to say aftr such a awesome update

Finallyy idiot ko reality krgyi and he qiestioned her Ye sab ..?? kab se..??😳

And khushi as always never knew anythng bt i m lgad she opened her heart to him dis tym and said her feeling for him asked him bt his feeling how cn he hide he it for 8 long yrs

I liked the fighting khushi who did fight for her feeling and also fighted wid him for being quiet

I feel sad for arnav I loved his dialogue d way he expressed d way he opened up and suddenly stopped realising nk name to be said

He said his heart out dii in dose few words his heart was a open book to khushi his pain his love for her his distance his jealousy everythng was dere d arnie who use to love his cookie whom he named khushi widhout knwng her real name was khushi he said it ol *waisa dii i hope u wil make him cnfss dis also ki he named her khushi bfr knwing it dat it was indeed her name khushi bcz till nw dat part hasnt come yet dat tym also u didnt revealed it her*

You knw dii dis line make me cry . "Kaha thi Khushi? Itni der kyun kardi? Mein bilkul akela padgaya tha."

and later dis lined made me laugh "I thought you were married and probably had kids by now"


I still feel bad wen khushi introduse nk to arnav as f i felt litreally angry cursed khushi how could she bt ltr everythng chngd

Diii u r very bad lolll sriously i mean pehle itna awesome emotional update diya ho uparse pura cmnt chaiye itni tarif kahan se karu apki u hve bcm a greedy soul nw u so u better give us kiss in each update samjhi aap😡😡

Goshhh dii i was litreally crying reading rnav opening his heart the way he said "People that I used to love turned to hate with my parents death except you Khushi. I tried very hard but my heart didnt allow me to forget you nor hate you and I promise that will never happen even after my death...""I truly mean it. You are my everything and only YOU will be my everything. I dont need anything else Khushi. Dont need anything else."


The hug was really heart southing it was a prms to be never left alone , dat she is his forever and no one cn apart dem nw

That dey were meant to be together

I was so damn impressed wod khushi diii the way she respected his love and moreover the way she thought his feeling are much more pure den those thee words wich every lover die to hear she stopped him saying that dey cnt be compared to his feeling for her i appreciate her for dis


He said her wooo hooo diii he said her tee words she was longing for the words frm which she thought og strting her relationship finally she heard it and moreover he said dose words so perfectly dat even i wanna hear dose perfect frm my mr perfect nw sigh kab ayega mera arnav


dam dey r so desperate souls for for those three words and the way u penned dere feeling i m soo tell u diii i m in love wid dem the way khushi praised arnav feeling for her the way she said he chngd love meaning hayeee it was awesome dii

The pics are perfectly edited dii dey r lovely lolll i m falling for ur updates more and more nw seriouly wala sach

The kiss wich strtd wid a ogliong turned to be a promise , a longing for each other , a way of expressing dere love , a passionate one and most iomportantly a perfect kiss wich i was waitng for ur perfect moment

And hayeee d way she said "You covered me" Waaahhh mazaa agya diii i love u so dammn much damnit kaise bataoo ab


Btw dii apkje readers loll hmlg greedy souls hai plzz thoda update de do na

nd yess tanu ur shayri was perfect yar exact describing the situation ufff kasshh main v likh pati aise 😆😆


Lo dii de di detailed cmnt ab aur kuch chaiye 😡😡

i so loved dis lines

"Tum aisa kyun ho Arnav? Aur kitna der karoge?

I couldnt keep my mouth shut and hands tight for 2 days, how could you keep quiet for so long. How long will you bury your emotions? Kuch bolte kyun nahin?

What do you wanna hear, how I fell for you the very first moment?
Or how I tried to convey my feelings every moment we spent together in college
Or how painfully I distanced myself from you when I learnt...



Stiilll trying a new one and dii pleaaj dnt use my dii crap in ur updates lolll readers will kill me
"Jabse teri mohabat ka ehsaas hua

Dil na jaane q teri haar baat soch kar hi khush hua hai

Ye anchaha ehsaas pehla na hua tha

Teri mohabbat ne humein nayasa kar diya hai"
Edited by Barun_Gf - 11 years ago

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