Arhi : Monsoon Rain #2 Chapter 12 upd in new thread - Page 65

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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update...how d hell sheetal became friends with arnav???
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Posted: 12 years ago
I love your writing style its nice how you explain the scenarios
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesomely done chapter
the best thing was that even in that weak moment of buaji...
Khushi didnt ever try to make an impression to him that i need u in my life.
she behaved professionaly and as normally with him. she didnt lean on his shoulders to cry or do something. she knows very well even if sheetal might be a wrong choice to him. it doesnt mean that if sheetal is out that means khushi is IN. The character of Khushi in this FF is well presented..
the dialogues the scenes reflects that Khushi realises that her life is messed up with responsibilities . she cant add more to it .
Sacrificing and supressing emotions is not at all a joke, The most bravest can do that

1. despite talent she hides that that the designs belongs to her creative mind. She belives seeing others like lavanya happy and she being the reason for her cheerfulness is more enriching than to get adulations from AR industries for creativity.

2. despite liking a man who is engaged. She never wishes ill of the pair of sheetal n arnav.

3. Takes all middle class taunts smilingly

in most times it looks she is expressing that- if u get happiness humiliating me .Ok fine.If u ar rich and hv the liberty to flirt and then neglect fine. i accept iam poor, i hv flaws, If that gives satisfaction to u fine.. cause its temporary one day i will be gone away from u all to be among people who might love me atleast a little..

so the Khushi in this FF being very soft,Humble, with lot of endurance is wonderful to read.

great work ,,update soon


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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful update as alwaz..!

Kavi,u r truly a brilliant writer who knws how to make their readers hooked up to ur stories..!

U knw how to frame out evrythng perfctly nd how to make d story interesting keeping d whole scenario in ur mind nd at d end it turned out to b just perfct rather i should say way too perfct..!

👍🏼 for u deary..!

Now cuming to d update -

so d "Friend" title is not at all going well for both of them,ahem thats good actually 😉

loved it how arnav got all irritated seeing raj,d IT department worker sitting beside khushi nd making he learn how to upld d documnts online 😆

he thought of going over it but possessiveness nd jelousy did not help him nd he came down to make dat Raj out of d scene nd sat down to make khushi learn the process but as he sat down too close by her,she forgot evrythng nd began to fumble nd finally him finding d documnt nd seeing d name of it he could not helo but bursted out laughing nd actually d name was hilarious 🤣

sheetal,damn she is such an irritating woman 😡

d way she said all those things abt naani nd also threw away nasty looks at khushi,arghhh disgusting actually 😡

but arnav did support his khushi nd khushi could not help but feel jelous listening d reason of arnav's absense as she thought of him partying wit sheetal,ahem jelousy can do wonders 😛

nd finally d party,sahil nd his attempt to flirt wit khushi nd making her drink nd arnav cuming up for her rescue nd den their dance which made arnav totally disgusted,again jelousy caught him up..!

Nd ther wen sheetal trued to get intimate wit him,khushi could not handle it anymore nd she moved outside nly to b followed by arnav witin few minutes..!

Loved it how he took her to d hospital nd arranged evrythng for buaji nd also stayed up wit khushi to comfort her nd they again talked abt their childhood memories,awww dats cute ❤️

so sheetal got caught by d police nd now arnav has to go to save her nd wen khushi said dat she will accompany him,he refused to take her to dat hell nd also said dat NK will b wit her in d hospital nd his last line,hayeee adorable nd beautiful..! ❤️

nd d way he said sorry to her seeing her crying nd taking her face in his hands for shouting at her for carrying AR's personal information wit her was heart touching..!

Loved d chappy ❤️

its simply way too beautiful
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing...just friends are so much in love😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
a roller coaster ride... wooo

i am truly loving the bonding our arhi are forming... good to see them together.. but what to do with these burning desires..

did arnav really called sheetal a s**t in front of khushi?? OMGEEE..

know you can but I cant".. haayyeee

superb fantabulous update..

waiting for next...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update...
This girl sheetal is too much...she is no match for arnav...both r really very different...i can understand that arnav bears her due to her dad...but i cant understand why sheetal bears arnav...she can clearly see how least interested is him with her...both of their lifestyles r really very different...hope sheetal herself will backout from this relationship...
I am feeling very bad for khushi...she is not getting the respect she deserves for her work...
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Posted: 12 years ago
nic update!!! 😃...gud dat sheetal got arrested...i just dont lyj her...nd bond between arnav and khushi is strong nd i cn see the green eyed monster in arnav for khushi!!! 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Both of them r immensely attracted towards each other''
but r trying hard to suppress their feelings...
Sheetal is so disgusting~~
I M HAPPY SHE'S ARRESTED~~
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Posted: 12 years ago
It is good that Arnav and Khushi are coming closer. Only hope that with Sheetal, Khushi does not head for a heart break !

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