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Posted: 12 years ago
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Alright, I wanted to give Sheetal the benefit of doubt but thats not gonna happen anymore. I thought she was just shallow and spoilt - a little like Lavanya in the show (in the early days). But this Sheetal is also insensitive, irresponsible and incapable of any real emotions. He spoke of his parents death anniversary and all she did was take a dig at Nani. She forced Khushi to go with Sahil. And then the drugs.. God this woman is incorrigible. 😡

I loved the scene between Dr. Manav and Anjali. I sensed some attraction from both ends - while Manav doesn't want to overstep his line as her doctor, Anjali is bound by her loyalty to her husband, however worthless he may be. She is emotionally needy and insecure and Dr. Manav is the only one who is able to give her some comfort from that misery. I was so sad to see Anjali like this - feeling insecure, unloved, unconfident. She is a wonderful person and so highly qualified, I hate to see what has become of her life. I sure hope she finds her way out of this mess and becomes a stronger person.

Arnav laughed! I could just imagine that scene - he looks.. beautiful, when he laughs, isn't it ? So handsome and breathtaking 😳 Museebat ka pitara was hilarious! Also Khushi's speechlessness and fumbling around Arnav.. oh the poor thing. The attraction between them isn't going anywhere. Having said that, they are truly being good friends for each other. She doesn't want him to go through any pain or hardship alone, and he wants to protect her from the harsh realities of the world. Sigh.

This was such a rollercoaster of an update.. just three or four scenes but they have taken the story so far and have told us a lot about the characters. Loved it Kavi 😊
Edited by vgedin - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing update as usual!! Loved it!
Arshi are bonding well!! Shit, a raid? Thats terrible. Wondering what would happen to arnav and sheetal's relationship now!!
Continue soon!!
Edited by .Boss. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Edit: First of all, I want to applaud you for taking on the subject of Mental illness and Depression as truly a debilitating disease that can drive a person to take his/her own life!! (in the western countries though, it can drive a person to kill innocent childern as young as 5 years old, before killing themselves that's a different story ). But what I mean to say is that it's a serious disease and one that needs a lot of TLC from the loved ones which Anjali is seriously lacking from Shyam..!! I truly felt sorry for your Anjali. Although, she took the first step in recovery by admitting herself that she has depression and sought professional care. Was she forced to marry Shyam? He is an a**hole and sooner every one realizes this the better it is. Hope things will work out with Manav 😉

That reminds me that Khushi should have told the incident with Shyam to either Arnav or Nani 😕
Arnav is clearly smitten by Khushi but won't or rather can't admit it for his engagement to Sheetal..!! I sense it was obligatory on his part but I'll wait until you uncover it for us 😉

haha he is taking his frustration on the IT person, Arnav darling, don't do that because I'm also IT 😛
The farmhouse party, I was dreading if something bad gonna happen to Khushi, thank god nothing happened!!

Who cares for Sheetal right..happy she is locked up, serves her right (petty me 😉)

Your writing is very natural Kavi, I love it 👏

Cheers
K

Edited by kclovearshi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
ufff..Sheetal is a b***h😡
Edited by dieforasr - 12 years ago
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I am so confused with Sheetal and her behavior. For the life of me, I just can't seem to figure her out (I guess it's understandable since she hasn't been around much). She's rich, spoiled, carefree, loves parties; what is she doing with a man like Arnav, who is all about business and has never so much as laughed in front of her? I really don't see any benefit she is getting out of this relationship as he's obviously just not that into her. I don't really care for what she does in her own life, but why is she trying to get Khushi involved in her parties...why does she hope that Arnav forces her to come? Why is she hellbent on Khushi joining Sahil on the dance floor and entertain the idea of the men who are interested in her? She seems so aloof all the time that I can't imagine her to realize the attraction between Arnav and Khushi, but she could me more intuitive than she lets on.

With the secret of Khushi helping Lavanya out deepening, I can just imagine imagine that Arnav will have a hard time being understandable when he finds out! They really are digging themselves in a hole and it's only a matter of time now before they get caught.

Arnav and Khushi are on this path of staying friends (and I think you have laid out the foundation of friendship between them really nicely!), but it's hard when there's so much attraction and chemistry between them. They are both equally as affected; Arnav being jealous just because a colleague is helping her; her being completely flustered just being close to him. There's only so much they will be able to avoid one another as they do work together!

Arnav's parting shot at the end of the chapter just tells you how much he actually cares for Khushi. He has no problems leaving his fiancee when she's already tipsy in an atmosphere that is surrounded by drugs and alcohol but he isn't even comfortable leaving Khushi by herself in a safe and secure hospital; that alone tells which direction his heart sways towards.

I loved the update as usual and am already looking forward to the next one!


Edited by A_BA - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice but after such a long time,anyways very well written
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Posted: 12 years ago
"I know you can but I can't".. In his tension.. He called sheetal s**t and even mentioned that what khushi means to him.. Positive thing abt Arnav's anger.. Unintentional confessions.. Loved it
Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Res ..
Why did he walk away as fast as he could ..
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Posted: 12 years ago
What is wrong with this Arnav? Why he is tolerating Sheetal ? She belongs to different world..
She is so annoying yaar.
But I think Sheetal will play like a catalyst in Khushi Arnav relation ..


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