Hi Kavi, sorry havnt been able to catch with comments fromthe beginning of the story as I am still stuck with my thesis of my last semester. I usually read the updates when I am traveling to and fro in the car. I hope sometime in the future I will be able to give you detailed comments, just as I like to give.
Well this is my first comment on Monsoon Rain so far. so far the story is going with a mind blowing pace. And I love this Arnav that you have portrayed, to be arrogant and angry, but at the same time in some way very gentle, tender and lovable. I truly adore how you have toned down his anger level for khushi a bit in this story. Khushi as ever is a breath of fresh air always. The kitten episode at the roof was so endearing. I wish Khushi had got to keep the kitten as her pet as she had named it even sheena. lol. would have been fun to see arnav interacting with her kitten. or maybe arnav can buy her a pet seeing her interest to care for animals even.
Anyways, this is a wonderful peice of work as always. And I like to see this comraderie and casual tension free relationship of arnav khushi. Shyam is lurking inthe corners but i hope arnav will soone get him out and beat him black and blue. i am so excited to seewhat happens. and will try to regularly comment if I get time. because i truly wnat to show my appreciation for the time and effort you take to think write and post and update, its the least i can do.
cheers kavi, and will be waitng for friday. 👏
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