Arhi : Monsoon Rain #2 Chapter 12 upd in new thread

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prpk525

@prpk525

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Congrats dear... Loved the update. Hope Arnav knows that the dress was designed by khushi.. Loved the way you described some my favourite scenes from the show. :)

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deeptha93

@deeptha93

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

That was a beautiful update! 😳

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.ButterCup.

@.ButterCup.

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

congrats for the new thread..

As usual fantastic update..

in this update there were some lovely moments..

firstly, arnav picked up khushi from bus stand and police man called arnav and khushi as boyfriend and girlfiend..

and the way u describe, khushi hold arnav's arm was amazing..

Secondly their whole journey of chandni chowk..their crossing the roads ,,khushi again hold arnav's arm,,their breakfast..he ordered her all favourite dishes and jalebies & i liked the way arnav forced khushi to eat at least her fav jalebeis ...her munching jalebeis scene was hilarious😆.arnav feel bit jealous from suraj...arnav cleared dust from her eye and khushi apply kohl for arnav thats really sweetand he he noticed that..their nook jhook..

thirdly khushi's lehnga choli..and arnav comes for her help and ties dories of her blouse.,,his sensual touches,,her hesitation and another interruption...😆..& last but not the least he gifted her bangles with a super cute note..😊

all and all it was an arshi's update...❤️

loved it...!!

Edited by chandni00 - 11 years ago

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ara_000

@ara_000

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

congrats on d new thread 🥳

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ara_000

@ara_000

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

ahhh yet again another fantastic chappy 👏

loving it how their rltnship is devoloping day by day..! ❤️

ahhh u actually have managed to give so many IPK magical momnts in dis chappy..!

Bangle,almost kiss,dori scene,rubbing d dust away scene - ahhh all r simply beautiful..!

Like i am reliving my IPK momnts all over again..! ❤️

so from dis chappy one thng is sure nd dat us arnav knws dat d lahenga is designed by khushi nd lavanya is nowhere into it nd dats why he compleamented abt d lahenga to khushi taking d name of lavanya..!

Loved the car scene where d police assumed them to b couple nd khushi did not deny to him to avoid any further problem..!

Their whole trip to chandn chock was beautifully written

nd i loved it how u have written abt khushi having a happy childhood nd as far as u can see khushi will ver soon knw abt arnav's dark past..!

NK nd lavanya r waste actually 😡

nd i knw dat very soon arnav will also cum to knw abt d reason why khushi is trying to hide her calls wit NK..!

Nd last scene where she found out d bangle,ahhh beautiful infct magical nd d way she said dat line why he does not let her be angry wit him for long was simply worth to give goosebumps..!

I loved it how u r penning down arnav's character showing dat he is a gem of a person..!

Nd dat whole lahenga scene,ohhh how mcan i say how much i love every bit of dat part..!

its beautiful,its sensuous nd its dreamy ❤️

beautiful update kavi 👍🏼

how do u alwaz manage to write sooo damn beautifully dat every tym i completed reading ur updates i am alwaz left wit a dreamy sigh..!

girl u r truly a brilliant writer ⭐️

cant wait to read d nxt chappy now 😊

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Anushkakaur21

@Anushkakaur21

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

I really enjoy all your stories and currently enjoyed this one. You write really well!! Really liking this one at the moment especially the ARHI scenes

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sman

@sman

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Your Arnav in Monsoon rain is sooo different from your earlier stories, I think I am more in love with this Arnav ;) I loved the ones from all FFs but this one has my extra love ;) I am not saying Arnav is saint but Kushi is harsh to him..he might not consider as a designer but he really cares for her..

Btw I feel nostalgic reading about Suraj and Palak..reminds me of Dark night Dawning. Arnav should be jealous of Suraj and not NK..Arnav is so dumb not to understand who designed the outfit? I doubt..

Btw am hoping the both attend Palaks wedding in Lukhnow..

Awesome update Kavi..loved it..

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narcy24

@narcy24

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Arnav and Khushi are coming closer.
I turda that Arnav already knows about Khushi...Im curious what will he do next...he always has a plan and he hates to be lied...Lavanya watch out.
He bought her bangles...
Wonderful update.

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#39

congrats on the new thread awesome update khushi is judging arnav according to his status the same way hew did with her loved how she throw back his words at him he needed to know not only he have a sharp tongue loved the update so cute he saw he in the outfit awesome update