Arhi : Monsoon Rain #2 Chapter 12 upd in new thread - Page 6

the trip to Chandai chowk was marvelous. All the huste bustle of that bazaar came alive in your writing. And he bought her bangles, already, I guess Sheetal needs to make an entry now

Originally posted by: vgedin

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Wow you managed to encompass so many classic IPK moments in one update - bangle gifting, dori tying, almost kiss, Arnav brushing away the dust from her eyes... aaah! I enjoyed this update so very much!

Just like he did recognize her from the fashion show, I am so pretty sure he is aware that she is the one designing the dress. If not then he isn't as smart as I thought he is, which is impossible. Ergo he know 😛

Lavanya and NK is useless, I do hope Arnav knows that. 😡

After reading this update, heres all that I look forward to in future -

- Khushi finding out about his troubled and rough past

- Arnav finding out the context behind NK's text.

You, Kavi, are the one who casts a sensuous spell on us over and over again.. oh when he feeds her the jalebi, when he ties the dori, when he tucks in her dupatta... hyperventilation galore! Aise mujhe acidosis ho jayega Kavi! Its like I get sucked into this vortex of Arnavliciousness and I am drowning in it, and quite happily at that. Its a high.. thats how well and vividly you write!

And that last scene was so beautiful, such a lovely way of telling us what a gem of a man Arnav is. Observant, sensitive. 😳

Lovely update, as usual 😊

PS - Also, I am so glad Khushi has had a happy childhood in this story.. Buaji does truly love her!