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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

La n NK makes khushi do all works🐷
lol...heidious clips..agree😆

yep...Khushi broke THE boy's heart😉

awsome update😃

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rajvta

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

the trip to Chandai chowk was marvelous. All the huste bustle of that bazaar came alive in your writing. And he bought her bangles, already, I guess Sheetal needs to make an entry now

These two cant stay away from each other. But are at loggerheads instantly when together. So I am thinking Lavanya will be negative, I thought she and NK would end up together.

Great update

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badfaith4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

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Wow you managed to encompass so many classic IPK moments in one update - bangle gifting, dori tying, almost kiss, Arnav brushing away the dust from her eyes... aaah! I enjoyed this update so very much!
Just like he did recognize her from the fashion show, I am so pretty sure he is aware that she is the one designing the dress. If not then he isn't as smart as I thought he is, which is impossible. Ergo he know 😛

Lavanya and NK is useless, I do hope Arnav knows that. 😡

After reading this update, heres all that I look forward to in future -
- Khushi finding out about his troubled and rough past
- Arnav finding out the context behind NK's text.

You, Kavi, are the one who casts a sensuous spell on us over and over again.. oh when he feeds her the jalebi, when he ties the dori, when he tucks in her dupatta... hyperventilation galore! Aise mujhe acidosis ho jayega Kavi! Its like I get sucked into this vortex of Arnavliciousness and I am drowning in it, and quite happily at that. Its a high.. thats how well and vividly you write!

And that last scene was so beautiful, such a lovely way of telling us what a gem of a man Arnav is. Observant, sensitive. 😳

Lovely update, as usual 😊

PS - Also, I am so glad Khushi has had a happy childhood in this story.. Buaji does truly love her!

awesome chapter
I was so jealous of Khushi
He feed her a jalebi and helped her with the costume and bought her bangles
😛

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daffodils06

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

beautiful chapter...

a trip bac to the old IPK days..not to forget u weaved ur own magic in each of the scenes...loved it so much...

khushi designed the whole dress all by herself...lavanya was not even in the picture..i am guessing arnav is sharp enuf to realize that the dress is solely khushiz..

i wonder y is he worried about khushiz equation with NK..is it just jealousy...??

was the note just about the boy..or did khushiz parting words broke arnavz heart too...??

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Wonderful update dear...

I am really loving this story...😊

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Addicted87

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

Arnav really doesnt like any man near Khushi be it Suraj Mathur or NK...and then the green eyed monster blinds him to such an extent that he ends up hurting Khushi...!! He really should think about why he acts like that or may be he is too afraid to find out the answer...!

Absolutely loved the Dori scene... Really wish the guard hadn't interrupted...:)

As if getting Khushi to do all the work wasnt enough, now Lavanya is so busy hanging out with her friends that she didn't even bother showing up. I have a feeling that Arnav already knows that they were all Khushi's ideas. And if not, I'm sure he will find out soon...!

Loved the update😊