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SaRunHolicc

@SaRunHolicc

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

It was an awesome update <3 .really really loved it.that policeman misunderstood the situation.picking up your girlfriend and hiding it from parents :-P 😆

loved how she got panicked seeing him in the middle of road in front of a car. Shows she cares for him more than she say <3

and loved that designing room scene , it was sensual. He would have kisswd her if gaurd would have not come that time.thats why toh he got angry 😆 waiting for next

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arshi21

@arshi21

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Oh boy!

Such an exceptionally sensual update.

I LOVED LOVED the last bit.

Arnav is cynical but he hasn't lost touch with emotions. He might have a scarred life but he respects emotions. I LOVED his gift to her.

My heart did a little dance when I read that. TOO TOO sweet.

And the jalebi and lehnga scenes?

No words.

Such an amazing update! :D

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l.savitree

@l.savitree

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Brilllant & beautifully well written update...love it

eagerly waiting to read more

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

lovely.. growing closeness and fights.. made me smile...

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soniachammu

@soniachammu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

U never fail to surprise with ur lovely stories thank u for the update

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Raila1014

@Raila1014

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

I love it. The policeman scene reminded me of the scene in the show when he went to buy water and left her alone in the car. She was worried he might get hit by a car. Aww, so sweet! This man seems to know her food tastes well. He is getting annoys by all the attention she is getting from other guys, like NK and Suraj but why? He is taken. Why did the security guard had to barge in? Pehle Aman's call on the show and now security guard in your story. When did he slip the bracelets in her purse?

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Aparamegha

@Aparamegha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

What an electrifying update...loved it to the core...

Loved the way Khushi held on to Arnav's hand and went along with the policeman's belief that he was waiting for his girl friend,,,

Loved the way Khushi pulled Arnav towards her thinking he might get run down by the car..

I have never been to Chadni Chowk but the way you have described the place definitely would like to visit it once..

The simple gesture of Arnav wiping Khushi'e lips and licking his finger was triff...

Their encounter in the studio was so sensuous...not only Khushi even I am wordering what would have happened if the guard hasn't knocked...

Arnav is getting jealous of NK...

The gesture of buying the bagles from the boy was very very sweet

Has Arnav already guessed that the entire outfit has been designed and tailored by Khushi...waiting eagerly to know what happens next

Lavanya is such a tart...

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SHALINI

@valeyrie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

loved the update Kavi 😊

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831628

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

lovely update as usual...loved it...

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shijinareneesh

@shijinareneesh

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

*sigh* why oh why...he didn realise it yet,did he????that she is the designer,not La...in dream land now... ... Do I need to tell you the update was beyond beatiful n amazing...