Arhi : Monsoon Rain #2 Chapter 12 upd in new thread

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adhu11

@adhu11

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Amazing update.

Loved der attraction towards each other

But about the design when will he understand😕

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Barunz4ever

@Barunz4ever

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Wow awesome update

Finally some feelings arising from both the sides😳

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Nidsubh007

@Nidsubh007

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+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Wow! Amazing chapter. So many special IPK moments weaves into one chapter.

The chemistry between your Arnav & Khushi is just sizzling!!!

Absolutely loved this update, will give it another read.

Congrats on the new thread!

Edited by Nidsubh007 - 11 years ago

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shree10

@shree10

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

This update made me spellbound. You rekindled so many memories of iconic moments between Arnav and Khushi.
The chemistry you weave through your words is amazing. I can visualize it!

Not only Khushi even we keep wondering - What would have happened if teh guard had not barged in??

I hope that Arnav realizes that Khushi designed the outfit!

I love the way you weave details of place so beautifully in the story. Makes me go to Ch Chowk for shopping !

and Suraj.. is as inevitable to your stories as wick is to lamp .. 😆

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AquaSandhya

@AquaSandhya

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Res...really late😲

Blow hot and blow cold - that's our Arnav and Khushi and it is a vicious cycle that continues and I LOVE IT DAMMIT!!!!

I am gonna go scene by scene this time...

Picking her up from the bus stop - Awww!!! That's an aww moment for me. ASR all serious but caught by the police man for picking up his girl friend from the bus stop. Cho Chweet...Well, I don't think I can be hammered for calling him a teenage boy coz his reaction to Khushi's batting lashes and her touch are reminiscent of a hormonal teenager in the throes of his first love.

Ride in the Auto - OMG OMG OMG

Did you just include my favourite blowing the dust particle in her eye scene...I just dies and went to heaven. I love the way his hand lingers and in IPK he even swirls her lock of hair nearby, indulging himself...Kavi...you are genius at this. What's to not love about it and you :) He is enjoying her proximity and nearness is not enough anymore. he feels the need to touch her, feel her and tease her (about the kajal).

The Road Crossing - I loved how Khushi is protective of him and the way he teased her to help him. I loved it for the way she hugged his hand. Did she by the way hold it to her side, his hand to the side of her breast?...huuu...swoon 😳

Bickernerwala - He couldn't have made it cleaer to Khushi about what he wants. He wants her lips and he is seriously taking some liberties here...touching her lips ...okay it is with jalebi...Two questions here...

1. Does he sense her intense attraction too that he is able to take that kind of liberty?

2. Why didn't Khushi want to eat? Coz it's expensive and she could not pay? She is a foodie and I was surprised she didn't want to eat.

Blowing Cold - Arnav is such a meanie...(b$#%^#d) sometimes. So, he is jealous of Suraj and NK and decided to Insult Khushi ...that she is a secretary and not a designer. Maybe a fact that he believes in but the way he said it...tch tch Arnav...you'll eat your words soon enough.

Khushi's reaction - One of the things I love about khushi's. She's spunky, and my God can she give it back? I loved the way she told him off. yes, whether it is safe or not out there, girls need to fend for themselves by looking out for themselves. I'm waiting to learn the hardships he had experienced though.

The Hottest Scene of the Update - It was a classic KAVI writing. Can you imagine, I felt like killing that guard. She touched all over and Khushi managed to stay on her feet...heehhehe. I haven't come across anyone who can make these scenes as hot as you do but still maintain the aesthetic beauty of it.

Bangles - I agree with Khushi...he won't let her love him completely by taking those hurtful words like the 'she's my secretary' and then he goes and buys her bangles. But this scene was lovely for the words he wrote more than the bangles themselves. That she was harsh and it doesn't suit her. he is getting to her and he likes the way she is. Isn't that we all dream about...a guy falling for you for who you are not and not whom he expects you to be.

Loved it :)

Edited by AquaSandhya - 11 years ago

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vks11

@vks11

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Awesome update. it keeps getting better and better. I loved all these moments. reliving it.

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kushiarnav1

@kushiarnav1

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

congratulations on a new thread...

Beautifully written...kushi and arnav chandinichowk ka journey...

kushi is very comfortable with arnav, because of attraction towards him or her nature...and arnav also doing the same they are enjoying each others company...

he remembers everything what kushis buaji tells about her...hayey hayey he order her favorite foods...😛😊...
their chemistry in each and every scene no words left yaar, while reading i can imagine both of them...u gave us each and every detail of their expressions...😉😉...

so arnav is jealous of nk and the way suraj is talking to kushi, realize soon arnav beta,jealousy se kuch nahi melaga😆...

wondering why arnav did not find out, kushi is the one helping lavanya,she is designing the costume...now he saw the costume he will guess ,i think sooo...

kushi has soo much temper, she is misunderstanding arnav every time, whats her problem?????...she is falling for arnav i guess ( iam thinking tooo much) i will stop...😊
hayeyhaye he gifted bangles...so sweet of arnav...from the last 2 updates u are telling story on kushis point of view right ...love to read what arnav is thinking about kushi...

thank u for the wonderful update...
cheers...

Edited by kushiarnav1 - 11 years ago

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shafqee80

@shafqee80

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

i think arnav knows k khushi z designing at d moment ...he z just giving her a chance by keeping his eyes closed ...loved d bangle scene in d end

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luvbug

@luvbug

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

awww tht was a cute arshiful update :D

oh i dont like lav...she is using her and taking all the credit... i hope arnav finds out soon that khushi made the costume n not lav :D

both are attracted to each other .. oh y did the security have to barge in... i was so glad anjali is not around... but y fear when security is here 😡