Revelation for the better! Ch4/10

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hii guyzz this is me devashi starting a new sory,no no actually an os!!! I am inspired by sooo many writers like faria anu di sakshi di naina di shilpa di n sarah n zainaab ,ayesha n lots more...
So here i am giving the prologue n this will just have 3-4 parts not more,,,
Forgot to tell u dat its on virman


Manvi was sitting in her room with her legs criss crossed and a pillow over her lap, staring at nothing particular,deeply thinking about what happened two days ago, with full concentration! How she felt that a crack was getting deeper and wider in their love story which was now their love marriage...

Virat came back home frustrated. He was angry, very very angry on manvi!!! It had been almost 4 months of their marriage and one and a half years of their relationship but Manvi never ever acted bold or let him come close to her. Whenever he tried coming close, tried to love her, tried to fondle her, caress her, she made excuses...stupid and lame excuses... He was really not sure that why was she behaving this way... I mean come on he was her husband after all and moreover she had to be courageous. He was no stranger to her. He was her husband and he expected her to behave bold and open up with her feelings...which never happend in these 4 months or in their relationship previously.

2 days back
Virat came and hugged Manvi from behind surprising her a little, but she quickly came out of his embrace and made a silly excuse that she had to change in something comfortable so she is going to the washroom. She headed towards the washroom and that's when Virat said: " Manvi ruko! Stop right there!"
Hearing this she stopped and turned to face him, only to see a very very angry expression on his face.
He continued " Manvi what the hell is wrong with you, why the hell are you scared of me? Am I haunting you or hurting you in any possible way?" He said and waited for her to answer.
She once again looked at him at then spoke " no Virat its nothing like that! Why do you think that way?" She said even though she knew what he meant by saying those words!
He looked at her with anger and straight away told her without wasting time as he seriously needed to talk to her about this " Manvi you very well know what I am trying to say, why is it that whenever I come near you, you make silly stupid excuses and go away? Why is it that you don't let me come near you?
He said and waited patiently for her answer...
Manvi then said everything without dragging the matter any further " because I get nervous! I don't know why but I do! I seriously don't have the courage to come close to you!" She said it alll...

" Manvi its high time you start understanding that I am not a stranger but your husband. You have been knowing me since more than a year and now you have been married to me since the past four months. I don't find any reason why you should fell nervous. I don't know why you have a problem if i love you." He said it with anger and confusion. ... There was silence for a couple of minutes and that's when he shouted at her to knock some sence into her brain "IT'S HIGH TIME YOU OPEN UP WITH YOUR FEELINGS, AND BEHAVE BOLD ENOUGH. OUT DO YOUR FEELINGS MANVI OR THIS SHALL DEFINITELY CREATE PROBLEMS BETWEEN US!!!!"

Now that left her stunned but he did not wait for her answer, took his phone and headed out of the room into a guest bedroom and did not come back that night.


Guyzzz this is the first part... I will update if you people approve!!!!! And plzz feel free give any sort of comments that you like, bad, good , okay, anything, I will accept everything. Guyzz plzz do comment!!!!

Love you all
Devashi


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Posted: 12 years ago
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like this story, continue pleasee..

hope they can solve this problem soon before it creats more troubles for them
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome prologue
seems interesting
plz cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice prologue. Interesting. Continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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this is interesting and yu write very well tooo
hope manvi gets over her nervoudnes sooon ...
update next part soon.and do pm me 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey .. very nice concept .. 👏
i would love to read more , please update soon n DO PM ME !!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome start
loved it
interesting
hope they solve their problem soon
continue soon and plz pm me
madhuharini thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow! it's really nice...
continue soon dear😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It's really an awesome dear
Beautifully written...Don't how manvi gonna overcome her nervousness?? 😕
Hope virat will support her...😊
Continue soon.
Takecare

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Posted: 12 years ago
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prologue seems really interesting
never read a story of this kind and on this concept
looking forward to the further parts of it
do continue soon
will be waiting for an update
and do pm me..😊

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