Revelation for the better! Ch4/10 - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its awesome. ...u r amazing writer dear... waiting for next...update soon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mebigirl

Ooo interesting!!! Cant wait man update asap! N tbh tht never happens in real life n no guy waits anyways! Haha update jaldi sa! N pm me n buddy me n wohooo



Yup will DEFINitely update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
Nice concept
poor manvi nervous nd nw virat moves out frm their room hw manvi's nervousness wll b vanishing
cont soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey awsome starting...i luv tis...plz continu sooonnn
and if possible pm me...👏👏😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
Precap!!!

Back to present
Manvi was still sitting in the same position, thinking about the same things again and again.

After their arguement which took place 2 days back, virat did not even talk to her once! He slept in the guest bedroom, took a bath there, got ready in that so called temporary room of his and kept ignoring manvi!!!
Manvi also did not speak to him much or we can say that shefrom her side didnt start a proper conversation but
Only her heart knew how she felt and has been feeling till today thinking about his silence and ignorance towards her so she decided that now she had to pester and get him to talk to her...

Keep reading to kno what is manvi thinking of doing!!!

Love
Devashi


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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
awsome precap...😉
continu sooonnn ❤️
and thnx fr the pm...😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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👏AWSM PROLOGUE ...CONTINUE SOON...IT'S INTERESTING 👏 ND PM ME PLZZZ
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Posted: 12 years ago
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the precap is amazing
i want to know what manvi is going to do
and what is going to happen between them
eagerly waiting for the next part to this story
update soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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NICE CONCEPT...😉😉
ND START DEVASHI!!!😉😉

CAN'T WAIT AFTER TEASER...
PLZZ CONT. SOON!!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 2
Manvi thought for a while...then she stood up went to the washroom, freshened up and walked out of the room. she had decided that now she reallly had to do something.
She went to the guest bedroom and saw Virat working on the laptop with a phone in his one hand and a file in the other. He just once looked up at her and then back on the file ingnoring her completely. Manvi felt sooo hurt but she knew that virat did have a valid reason to get angry.
She went close to him, took trhe file away from him, but to her surprise he did not react and concentrated on his conversation which he was having with someone on the phone.
The next thing that she did shocked him more, but he still didnt react. He really wanted to show her that he was hurt, very very hurt. She just snatched his phone and disconnected the call.
he then went to his laptop, kept on the bed, and continued surfing the browser...she was sooo petrified that she just banged the laptop screen to its keypad and kept it on the couch which was placed across the room so that he would not reach it any time soon.
to her surprise he still did not react as he really wasent doing anything important, was just pretending to do so.
he just gave her a 'i am not in the mood to fight with u anymore' look and stormed out of there to the ;living
she had tears in her eyes, big fat tears which were to escape anytime soon but she was not giving up, not so soon atleast. she followed him to the living
virat's pov
i am so hurt i mean how can she behave like that with me, i am her husband for god sake and she knows that i love her way to much. what i am i asking for? just an answer that why she has been behaving and avoiding me like that. is that reallly too much? i dont think so.
does she not understand how bad i am felling to hurt her, how cruel i am thinking of my self, but i am just doing it to get that f*****g truth out from her and i am not backing out until she gives me the reason instead of those lame and silly excuses...
i am fed up of her lame ideas to avoid me and be all ignorant
i am walking in the living room and i kno she is following me but i am not gonna turn. she has to realize how hurt i am, how much i want to love her, until then she has no chance of receiving any attention from my side.
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virat entered the living and switched the tv on waiting for manvi to come and thats when he wud start with his silent treatment again...
he saw her coming down the stairs AND thats when she was about to slip all thanks to her stupid and long saree... he had told her sooo many times not to wear sarees unless it was some holy function or some wedding... but she never listened...
he zoomed towards her and caught her just in time when she was about to slip and hit her delecate head on the ground...
she was buzzy staring at him and enjoying his possessiveness and careful nature looking into his eyes...
virat : what is wrong with u manvi???? how many times have i told u to not wear these stupid and long sarees at home...abhi gir jaati toh... pata hai jaan nikal gayi thi meri...
he said with concern in his eyes and love in the words he just said
manvi kept looking at him... then their eyes met and virat realized that he was still holding her tight
he immedialtely left her and moved away giving her a ' be carefull from next tym' look
then it hit her... she got the solution to her problem and that was that if she needed virats attention, she had to hurt herself. only then he would be with her,
she made up her mind and said to herself 'mrs manvi virat singh vadhera agar tu mr virat singh vadhera ki undivided attention chahti hai toh tujhe dard toh sehna pade ga"...
guyzz i am done wid d next part bas abhi likes aur cmnts baaki hai aur i have not pmed anybody yet...
love u all
devashi

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