Revelation for the better! Ch4/10 - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
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interesting precap plzz update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 4.
Next morning.
The sun rays entered from the window reaching upto Virat's face clearly disturbing his awesome sleep. He stirred and moved a bit only to feel another body beside his which was Manvi's. He looked at her face and bent down and kissed her forehead stroking her hair, a smile crept on his face seeing how babyish she can be... He thought "puri pagal hai, pehle khud toh paas aana nahi dete aur phir aisi silly harkate karti hai taaki main door na jaoon...puri buddhu," thinking this he realized what she actually tried to do. His heart ached thinking of manvi constantly trying to hurt herself to keep him near her. Then everything she did the previous day fell back in place. He was actually shocked that manvi really tried all if to not let him be away... His expression changed from happy to angry. He was angry on her cause what she did, did not make sense at all.
He pulled his hand back and sat up straight..., when manvi did not fell the light and soft stroking anymore... She stirred in her sleep, moved and sat up rubbing her eyes.
She saw virat facing his back towards her. She snaked her arms around his waist and kept her face on his back and said "good morning virat"
To her surprise he did not respond and neither did he turn. She at first thought that he did not hear here so she thought to make the scene funny and said "arre virat Tumhe pata hai ki tumhare Jo dhai kilo ke haath haina unke beech some ka maza hi kuch aur... I had a very good sleep... Plss mujhe roz aise hi sulana aur..." She stopped in between when he shrug her hands got up from the bed. He, in frustration, threw his phone and banged his hand on the side table.
Manvi was taken aback with this and asked him "kya hula virat?"
" mujhse mat pucho kya hua... Manvi Tumhe sach main kabhi nahi pata lagega ki mujhe kaisa feel ho raha hai...toh isliye mujhse baat mat karo."
" par i am sorry na virat... Plzz jane do na yeh sab"
"Jane do? Manvi ye itni chotti so baat nahi hai ki jaane do samjhi... Achcha mujhe ek baat batao ki agar main aisa kuch karoon toh?"
"Aisa karoon matlab?"
"Yahi ki apna haath kata lena, Jana bhuj kar gir jaana ya phir usse bhi kuch bada kaise ki apni jaan hi de dena!" He said the last part gritting his teeth. He was very annoyed.
"Chup karo virat! Kya faltu ki bakwas kar rahe ho!"
" achcha so now I don't make sense... Sahi toh kahe raha hoon... Yeh sab karte mujhe Marne se achcha hai ki mujhe ek baar mein mar Dalo. Aware tumne kabhi so ah ki mujhpe kya beet rahi hoge Tumhe aise dekhke... Is liye mujhe ek baar mein hi aapni zindgi khatam kar le..."
He stopped there. How can he continue when his lips were sealed. I mean how can you speak when some one is kissing you.
Manvi did not let him complete. How can she when the person who mattered the most to her, the person who was the most important to her was uttering crap about killing himself. She could not bear it. She loves him to bits to hear this shit crap from him.
She placed her lips over his not allowing him to speak. Virat at first tried to push her away cause he was still angry but Manvi did not budge she stayed their and kissed him till his body relaxed and that was when she understood that he was no more angry. She then tried to break away. It virat held on to her not lettering her move. She sucked his upper lip while he gently did the same to her lower lip.
After a while their trance was Brocken by the servant who came to inform them about the breakfast.
They broke apart and looked here and there not being able to meet their eyes.
Their silence was Brocken when Manvi spoke " I am sorry virat, I am reallly very sorry. Pls don't be angry, I promise ki I will never do this again but pls don't be angry. I just can take it." She said in a kiddish tone holding her ears. Virat smiled at her childishness and his angry had melted seeing her like this. He held her hands which were on her ears and kissed them. He then cupped her cheeks and aid "I believe you Manvi but pls don't repeat this again... I will not be able to e you suffer in pain. Pls because you know that my life is in you so be careful from next time."
Tears made their way down her eyes and she hugged him tight. He hugged her back and stroked her hair lovingly. They stayed like that for sometime when virat received a phone call and he moved to the washroom to freshen up.
But Manvi stayed there thinking about their fight which was just solved and a smile crept on her face but it was son replaced by a frown thinking about the sole reason, the base of this fight which was the argument they had that night.
She knew that virat had still not forgotten bout it. She knew that she needed to solve that soon, she also knew that neither of them were t fault, neither virat nor Manvi. The only person to blame was that one man and that one mistake that they had committed which had created a rift between virman. She was not at fault as that were her college days and it was a totally new experience for her and virat was not at fault as he knew nothing about this man and her past so it was well obvious for him to think the way he did. But he was alo Manvi and it was high time that she solved her puzzled paat and not let it affect her already solved present. She had to work on their relationship keeping her past aside.

Hey guys I am done with this prt and this pastry is dedicated to lucifikar Maupassant. I will update the next part soon. Thank you.


Edited by agarwal.devashi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
I Reallyy Like Ur Story !!
Loved Itt !!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
Fab
too good
like it
awesome
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
nice update want happen in her
past update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
Hey can u make index ...
Read first part its awesome...
Then readers need index...
But
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Like ur work
fab work
too good
do pm me if u can plz...
Edited by Niaksharma - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
Awesome update sweetheart...
Few days back i suddenly wondered that u never updated this story of urs recently n yesterday i saw ur post in fanfiction...
U know m too occupied these days to notice things... Sorry for that...
I ❤️ the whole update...
Now waiting to know about whom is manvi thinking... Who is the man behind her past and why she never told virat anything...
Cont soon...

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