Revelation for the better! Ch4/10

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pink1

@pink1

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#41

nice update he get angry because she hurt herself
to his attention but last he get to know she trying to
change this relationship update soon

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shaalivirman

@shaalivirman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

yaaarrr...im luving ur story very much...but plz giv us long update na...plz plz❤️

the update ws just awsome...perfect👏

continu sooon and thnx fr the pm...😊

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Ridzi123

@Ridzi123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

this part for amazing

loved virat's concern for manvi

really liked the part

continue soon

will wait for ur updates

n thanks for the pm😊

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Tuba KHAn

@Tuba_KSG

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

really realy small one , but i liked it , virat's anger was right , but i liked maanvi's KOSHISH !!
Plz yar next time long one n ASAP !!

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niki795

@niki795

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

awesome part
continue soon
waiting for update

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abirami

@madhuharini

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

it's really awesome..
luv manvi's childish character a lot...
Luv Virat's always caring nature...
Pls continue soon dear..

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tinni04

@tinni04

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

it was superb update soon please😊.

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agarwal.devashi

@agarwal.devashi

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Precap!

I was taken aback with that kiss!!! Omg is that really my wife kissing me, or is it a dream!!!!

Is she planning to not leave me today!!

Manvi you dont need to do this if you are not comfortable with it

But she did not stop...

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Viratmanvifan31

@Viratmanvifan31

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Posted: 11 years ago

#49

nice story ...totally diffrnt concept, lvd it. jst a suggestion change d title of 4rm confuse miss manvi to CONFUSE MRS. MANVI VADERA. . . she is married in ur story na u sud write mrs. nt miss. plz pm me wen u update . <3