Revelation for the better! Ch4/10 - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
awesome update
loved it
will manvi hurt herself to get attention from virat
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Teaser
Virat: What the f**k Manvi, how can you just trip and fall while walking and that to on this even land, Virat said picking her in his arms and taking her back to the room from the garden where Manvi had fallen on purpose, to dress her wound.
While walking he kept scolding her and blaming her for the stupidest person she can be and how small her eyes are to not see and walk!!!!!

Virat: aakhen hai ya button Manvi. Tum kya sach main andhi ho gayi ho jo aajkal Tumhe dikhayi nahi deta!!!!! Seediyon par bhi gir gayi thi na!!!! Agar mein nahi hota toh tumhara kya hota. He said without realising what it meant to her!!!
Saying all this they soon reached the room but Manvi kept staring in his eyes, the eyes that spoke of the unconditional love, the eyes that spoke of the undying concern,the eyes that spoke volumes of care, the eyes that spoke of his tension and pain seeing the bruises on her knee and the blood that was dripping continuously.

He made her sit on the bed with her back resting on the head board and legs flat on the surface of the bed.
He went and got a bowl of water, antiseptic, cotton fool, bandaid, and pants for her to change.
She still didnt blink and was over the top seeing his concern but she had to do this...fr her love

He slowly started lifting her pant and lifted it up till her knee. He scrunched his eyes seeing the cut and blood. And very quickly dressed her wound, carried her upto the washroom and gave her the pair of shorts he had got so that the pant just reached till her thighs giving absolutely no weight to her knees and then...

Guyzz that's it.. Read more to find out...

Edited by agarwal.devashi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
Nice teaser
Do cont soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
Awsm os...:) cont soon and pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
Nice teaser. ...plz update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
really sorry couldnt comment for the last update...
it was tooo good the silent treatment to make her realise her mistake and speak up to him and the love and care of his was awesome 😃
precap is tooo good ..update soon 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
teaser look interesting
update soon and long one
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
nice teaser... plzzz update soonnn...can't wait
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
Part 3
Virat lifted Manvi and took her near to the washroom door, and stopped right there. He turned around to leave when she caught his hand. That did surprise him, he didnt expect her to stop him, but she did.
He turned around and asked her-

Virat: what happened Manvi, go change!
Manvi: virat I can't go alone, actually you took a bath half an hour before so the washroom is still wet, so I might... He didnt let her complete and cut her in between saying
Virat: so you think you might slip, right?
It was more of a statement than a question.
Manvi just nodded not knowing how to reply, or rather what to reply. But here he thought of teasing her a little and said-
"So what do u want me to do??" He said raising his eyebrows pretending to not know what she is actually trying to say, but she didnt get his teasing and said " virat understand, I might slip and I already have a knee cut. Ek to Jaan bhujkar khud ko chot pahuchaoon aur phir tum bhi bhao nahi dete! Samajh nahi aata karu toh kya karun!!"
She said it without realising what she is actually blabbering.
Virat raisd his eyebrows and looked at her with a stunned expression. He was scandalised hearing what she had just said.
He calmed himself as he felt his anger rising and it could erupt on Manvi at any point of time so he said " matlab tumne yeh sab purposely kiya. Tum samajhti kya ho apne aapko haan? You did not even bother to think once about how I would feel, how tensed I would be, how worried I could get thinking about your wounds and injuries, I am not important to you haan? Why am I even talking to a nutshell like you who dosent even care if i die!!"
He said and turned around and started walking towards the door and Manvi tried to stop him.
Manvi: virat meri Baat to suno, virat", saying she tried walking. Suddenly she felt the pain in her knees and exclaimed with pain "aaah". That was all to stop virat from walking out.
He quickly rushed to her rescue forgetting all the anger that was rising in him minutes back and lifted her up in his arm and straight away took her inside the washroom, locking the door Sassoon as they entered.
He did not switch on the lights but managed to make her sit on the chair kept in front of the mirror of the closet.
He did not wait for her response and starting unzipping the zip of her pant and opened the button as well.
Manvi shivered at his touch, and current passed through her body as his cold yet soft fingers touched her lower stomach. He did not waste time and started taking her pant off, slowly and tenderly so that it does not touch her cut.
Soon she was in front of him only in her top and under garment. He then made her stand on that chair and started to put her legs through the shorts which just ended up till her mid thighs.
She held his shoulder for balance and as he was sliding up the shorts, his fingers kept brushing past her skin making her go weak on her already weak knees. He slowly reached the top and zipped her shorts.
He the carried her back to the room, and placed her on the bed as though she was as delicate as a flower.
He covered her with the blanket and turned to leave not making any sort of eye contact with her but she stopped him and pleaded him to make her sleep today, with him.
He could not deny to her request and laid down beside her, with her in his arms. His one hand around her waist and the other hand caressing her thighs, but to his shock she did not move or object or wiggle but stayed calm.
Now he had a big, wide smile on his face, seeing and noticing and realising that she was trying to open up, trying to get close to him and also trying to give them another chance which was really required.


Guys i am done wid part 3... Hope u lyk it.
Plzzz cmnt and lyk and tell me do i continue!!!!???

Edited by agarwal.devashi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome part Dear
waiting for next
update soon

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